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Published: 2018-08-14 11:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 31637; Favourites: 309; Downloads: 0
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Hello, crappy cover image! That's right, it's finally here, and with a cover I made myself that you totally can't tell was made by a moron!*ahem* Anyway, it's done and it's here, holy crap! Choose from the perspective of ten women as they navigate their way through Jhana's diabolical simulation and try not to get captured and tied up! (Or do, whatever you want!)
So, yeah. I should point out that your choices do matter for avoiding capture but they don't for deciding the ending. There are ten(!) EDIT: Eight. Sorry. There are eight endings to choose from. Whoops. END EDIT different endings, depending on which one you choose. So this is also a choose your own ending story. I think it's pretty clear that I got way too ambitious for this and that I'm also not very good at making these things. But I'll let you be the judge of that.
The link is here: Click here!
Be aware as well that I did my best to stay true to old CYOA books so, sometimes, you may find yourself thinking "Oh, come on! How was I supposed to know THAT would happen?" Like I said, I wanted to keep this thing in the spirit of the old CYOA novels where you had to be borderline psychic to avoid death. Except, instead of dying, you get captured. Can't have death in my fun little, DiD world, can I? That's something I'll never do. My damsels will always live to see another day. Count on it.
Hope you have fun and thanks for reading!
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Ah you got to that big ol' mess, did you? Glad you enjoyed it!
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Hey how did you make this? I wanted to try to make one myselfΒ
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I used a tool called Twine. I think it was actually Twine 2 that I used. It can be used in browser or dowloaded as a program and it's free. There's a tutorial wiki for how to use it too and even how to get it put online via some free webhosting service( I forget the name of the one I used) Of course, once the file is done, you could just upload it to a file sharing site and people could download it there. I'm pretty sure the Twine wiki can explain it better than me.
Anyway, hope this helps!
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This was very well done.Β Just finished going through everyone's adventures and enjoyed the differentΒ perilous situations.Β Each one was quite creative, which can be hard doing so many different characters.Β I think Celia's arc was my favorite overall, but I definitely liked how different to the others Taria's story started.Β Thought I do wonder how everyone saves Celia at the end, being there's no key and all
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Hey, thanks a lot! It was a bit daunting going through each path and then realizing I still had so many more to do. I was pretty gassed by the end of this, as far as ideas are concerned.
I'm glad you like Celia's arc! I wanted hers to be a little different than the others. And with Taria, I thought it might interesting to try and write an escape situation where someone is already captured. That was really the only reason why her path was different.
And maybe there was a key? Maybe Celia just didn't see it? (Not really. Her path would have ended the same no matter what. I guess I forgot to add some way to unlock the handcuffs in the various endings where they rescue her.Β Thanks for pointing that out. I knew I forgot something!)
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Decided I should comment after I finally finished all the paths. This was one hell of a good time. It was pretty tough to help the ladies avoid getting tied up for the most part, though. Not that I minded Nice job.
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Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it. That was all by design, of course, but I swear to you that it is possible to avoid capture on most of the paths.
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Brilliant work - thank you so much for sharing!
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Hey, thank you for checking it out! Β
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Heck yeah! This was freakin' GREAT! I really like Meryn's perspective and I would have liked it to be longer but I feel like I would say that no matter what.
Also, omg, Celia's part was the BEST!Β
Great job!
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, Meryn's path wound up being a tad shorter, especially if you avoid getting captured, but I had started to run out of ideas by the time I got to her. Though I did eventually come up with something and I'm glad you liked it!
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THAT is pretty damn cool!! How long did it take you to do that? I just did one character,, Elyn, but hope to get around to them all. Really, really cool.
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Thanks! Glad you think so!
This was about a month of work and, honestly, I feel like I could have done better. You don't have to do ALL the characters. It is a bit much, I'll admit.
Also, I find it rather interesting that you would pick Elyn first since I actually wrote her path first. Weird how things work out sometimes.
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No kidding, you wrote Elyn first? OK, before I tell you why I went with her first; Why did you write her first? There was a definite reason I picked her first, just curious of we were thunking the same thing. Or maybe you can speculate on why you think I chose her first. Like I said, there was a method to my madness.
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I wrote Elyn's path first because I hadn't really come up with exactly what I was doing with the whole thing yet and I came up with the whole ''choosing restraints' idea on that path right there and then. That and I figured her path would be one of the more straightforward ones and it was a good way to get used to Twine and get the ball rolling, so to speak.
I often figured people would like Elyn because she loves bondage but, if there was some other reason why you picked her, I'm not sure I can speculate why.
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Ah, makes sense. The choosing restraints was indeed cool.
But yeah, you are right in that last paragraph. I was really curious how someone who loves getting bound and gagged would react, so that was the reason. No surprise I guess.Β Β
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Glad you liked it! You'll see more of these characters for sure. And more stories. But CYOA? I need a break after that one! And I need to go smaller next time! Thanks for the comment!
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