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Published: 2017-07-10 13:59:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 0
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So after over a month of absence, which was due to a number of different circumstances, I can finally update not one, but TWO pages! Yay! Prepare for some more riding and talking! I'm incorrigible....

I think Guillaume is kind of sick of Conain by now. Also, I seem to have gotten confused as to who the main character of this story is…

(If the writing is too small, let me know!)
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Comments: 31

MrRemoraman [2018-05-04 12:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice travel sequence.

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akitku In reply to MrRemoraman [2018-05-04 16:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Wasn't sure how to depict travel but I think it worked ok.Β 

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HelevornArt [2017-12-08 11:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Guillaume looked sick of Conain from the first moment they met, but he doesn't look like the kind of person who takes people to heart easily xDΒ The image with the sunrise is fantastic, and so is the central panel with the close-up on the hooves

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akitku In reply to HelevornArt [2017-12-09 11:16:17 +0000 UTC]

He's a grumpy one for sure!
Thank you so much for the great comment. The sunrise was my favourite part actually.

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my-sword-is-bigger [2017-09-08 07:15:49 +0000 UTC]

That sunrise! Long shadows! The colours, the clouds! All those horses! Now you're just showing off bruh.

lol and Guillaume looks pretty fed up

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akitku In reply to my-sword-is-bigger [2017-09-08 14:36:32 +0000 UTC]

So glad you like it! Gosh that page was a toil to get through. All them horses!

I'm sure there will be a page when he will smile. I'm sure of it!

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Eldr-Fire [2017-08-01 16:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, beautiful lighting on this page. I love all the sunrise preparation panels.

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akitku In reply to Eldr-Fire [2017-08-02 05:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I like playing with the lighting. I'm glad it looks like a sunrise and not a sunset I wasn't actually sure...

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Vivocateur [2017-07-28 07:48:59 +0000 UTC]

The way you did the sunrise in the first panel is fantastic!
I really liked the three panel strip in which the riders break camp.Β This comic keeps getting better and better at conveying information through the visual components of the medium. In the later pages particularly, it's starting to feel very movie-like, which is really cool.Β 

The second to last panel is really impressive (all those horses! it must have taken an age!).

Lol! It seems like Guillaume is getting just a little tired of the constant requests X'D

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akitku In reply to Vivocateur [2017-07-28 13:42:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad to hear you see improvement! Honestly, that really means a lot! Thank you!!!

Ugh perspective! :/ And yeah, the many horses panel just took ages. I was tearing my hair over that one.

Guillaume now thinks that he has another point to add to his 'things I dislike list': people who appear shy but actually are constantly demanding something from you. I think Conain as a whole might be in danger on being on that list too...It's a long list.

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Sleyf [2017-07-11 17:40:36 +0000 UTC]

That sunrise is magnificent! And I love how you added the shadow of the trees on the grass. Conain is really pushing it with his nervousness, he's making me suspicious!

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akitku In reply to Sleyf [2017-07-11 18:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for reading! (especially from your holiday! Hope you're having a good one btw). I was pretty happy with the sunrise but the next panels could have been better I think.

Haha, Guillaume thinks Conain is pushing it with his constant new demands. He seems shy, but actually he's constantly coming up with new things he wants others to do! What a guy...ugh!

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Sleyf In reply to akitku [2017-07-12 21:41:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I am intrigued to know where this goes and what unfolds next! (My holiday is actually one of those ones where I've been counting down the days until it ends - I've been reminded of why I hate 'family vacations' - but it'll be over soon!)
Well I know that a lot of the time, when people start comics, they usually end up improving a lot along the course of pages and will sometimes go back and redraw things, but personally I sort of like it when you can see the progress the artist has made, it's really interesting.

Lol well he sort of is, like that one person you decide to help with something and then they start slipping in more favours along the way *stink eye*

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Kimberly-SC [2017-07-10 23:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Awww, the sunrise is so peaceful
Your horses look great, they are really like war steeds

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akitku In reply to Kimberly-SC [2017-07-11 08:01:11 +0000 UTC]

That's the sense I wanted to create after the night page.

Ugh, horses are so hard aren't they? I'm glad they look ok here. But it is a struggle every time! I'm so glad that for the time being I won't have to draw any more!

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Kimberly-SC In reply to akitku [2017-07-12 01:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes there must be something peaceful after all the night scenes

Yes D: I really hate it to draw their legs and hooves XD
(Luckily I have trained drawing horses, because the little kids in my family always want a horse picture XD)
True! I hope you won't have to draw a whole army of riders in the future...too many horses and people D:

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Irsanna [2017-07-10 22:33:29 +0000 UTC]

The picture with the horse's feet - very brave!

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akitku In reply to Irsanna [2017-07-11 08:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I wasn't sure about that panel - I thought it would be a way to suggest travel...but not sure how well that works.

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Irsanna In reply to akitku [2017-07-11 21:50:40 +0000 UTC]

It's interesting and cinematic! I think this is quite appropriate in such a narrative!

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BricksandStones [2017-07-10 19:39:57 +0000 UTC]

It is so good to see your work again! I was really waiting for this! These early morning scenes are very good - I particularly like the ones in the middle - the two knights preparing their horses - it is clear they had a long night and I like their expressions a lot - also I really like the perspective in the last panel - where Conain talks with Guillaume - all their exchanges are very good As for the main character - I would not worry about it at this stage - I think it is better that at this stage there the Hospitallers act as a unit and not one of them seems to stand of as the main focus of the story... It would be too obvious if, from the beginning all the dialogue would focus on one, seemingly unimportant knight..... either way, it is great to see your work again, I hope you will get some more time for drawing now!Β 

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akitku In reply to BricksandStones [2017-07-11 18:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the great comment! I'm glad you like the morning scene and he exchange between Conain and Guillaume. I really enjoy writing their talks.

I hope so too!

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Azul-din [2017-07-10 19:30:07 +0000 UTC]

I don't know how you manage it- these are really good- you are certainly getting the hang of this kind of storytelling. Your first panel was super, really portrayed the 'long shadows of morning' perfectly. BTW,Β  ex post facto I suppose, I wish you luck with all of those interviews!

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akitku In reply to Azul-din [2017-07-10 19:48:09 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, I'm so glad to hear that! Β  This page was really troubling for me - I wasn't sure how much detail to put in, how much of 'breaking camp' I should show, etc. Plus I was really worried the dialogue isn't clear enough, but making the font larger was tricky because that last panel with their conversation is pretty small... But in the end, I guess it worked out ok.

Thank you!

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Azul-din In reply to akitku [2017-07-10 19:54:10 +0000 UTC]

The font is not a problem, one click on the (+) button makes all clear, even for old folks like myself.Β  It's a beautifully illustrated story, and richly deserves all of the attention it is generating. Plus I think you seriously underrate your abilities as a storyteller.

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amazingturtles [2017-07-10 17:08:05 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad to see you back! And i liked how you handled the imagery of them breaking camp, it moves forward very smoothly

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akitku In reply to amazingturtles [2017-07-10 19:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the kind words! It's so annoying to have so little time.

I was wondering how to portray that breaking camp moment without it being tedious. Glad it worked out ok!

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charcoalfeather [2017-07-10 15:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see more of this again! Hope everything is slowing down on your side so you can catch up with your personal art projects and stories.Β 

I love the way you did the sunrise and the gradual shift to day. The colours are lovely!

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akitku In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-07-10 19:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Well, I'm still really busy so I'm not sure how much I will be able to draw...Fingers crossed!

I was pretty happy with the sunrise panel. I was a bit disappointed with the colours in the last ones though....I was worried it looks a bit too...cloudy. So I'm glad you say it works! Thank you!

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charcoalfeather In reply to akitku [2017-07-10 19:25:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I hope you get to finish everything soon and have some time to yourself.Β 

Are you doing any watercolors recently?

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akitku In reply to charcoalfeather [2017-07-10 19:27:25 +0000 UTC]

No, I haven't done any for ages! I'd really like to...it's watercolour month after all...not sure if I'll have time to though...

Your recent watercolours are just so inspiring btw. You're really becoming amazing with them!

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charcoalfeather In reply to akitku [2017-07-10 19:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you should! I hope you do get some time at least for small sketches.Β 

Thank you! I hope to practice more.Β 

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