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AKsroa4a — Have You Ever Just Stood There
Published: 2011-05-08 23:39:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 585; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 15
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Description Have you ever
just stood
there?
In an open field?
And felt the rain
fall down?
On your face?
Your chest?
Your arms?
Your back?

Have you ever
just stood
there?
With tears
running down
your face?
To the ground
below?
To mix
with the fallen
raindrops?

Have you ever
just stood
there?
Waiting?
For the clouds
to retreat?
And the sun
to return?

Have you ever
just stood
there?
Watching
the horizon?
Looking out
for the one
who could cease
the rain?
Dry the tears?
And brighten the sky
by being your new sun?

Have you ever
just stood
there?
Wondering
when
you can stop
waiting?

Have you ever
just stood
there?
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Comments: 16

spriggan-62 [2011-07-25 22:10:13 +0000 UTC]

It most certainly does NOT stink. Nice work.

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AKsroa4a In reply to spriggan-62 [2011-07-26 04:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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GIANTGIRL [2011-05-17 10:03:23 +0000 UTC]

I have.

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AKsroa4a In reply to GIANTGIRL [2011-05-28 20:37:12 +0000 UTC]

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changingnights [2011-05-15 18:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I have. So many times.
Excellent poem <3

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AKsroa4a In reply to changingnights [2011-05-28 20:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much.

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changingnights In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-05-29 00:47:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^

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Sakura-lies [2011-05-15 17:16:02 +0000 UTC]

I love this. The vagueness of heartache makes it so easy to relate to. I also like the way you spaced everything to help with timing and rhythm, altogether, you did a great job! :3

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AKsroa4a In reply to Sakura-lies [2011-05-28 20:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much. I do the spacing like that to invoke the rhythm in most of my pieces, so if you want to see more please check out my gallery.

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redbird8899 [2011-05-10 11:03:03 +0000 UTC]

i likes this!

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AKsroa4a In reply to redbird8899 [2011-05-28 20:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesomes!

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Acro111 [2011-05-09 20:26:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one, I could see this vividly happening...

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AKsroa4a In reply to Acro111 [2011-05-28 20:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, even though I myself don't think it's that vivid.

*late reply is late*

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Acro111 In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-05-28 21:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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AMII-ANESTHETIC [2011-05-09 03:52:51 +0000 UTC]

yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, and yes. i have done all of the above :/
i really like this one :3

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AKsroa4a In reply to AMII-ANESTHETIC [2011-05-28 20:40:47 +0000 UTC]

It's okie. And thanks.

*late reply is late*

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