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Published: 2010-12-26 06:30:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 418; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 6
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In this place,of the long gone,
solemn prevails.
The past,
and the passed,
thank thee for your visit,
for not many come,
to their solemn playground.
"The light deceives you,
my friend.
"It is not the one,
of fun.
"Join us,
in our eternal siesta,
among the ghouls and ghosts,
and the shadows and shades,
of the dark."
They plead.
Do you choose to relinquish life?
In return for this passive non-life?
Choose wisely,
for there is no return.
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Comments: 30
Your work has been featured here: Goodbye and Thanks
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This is an amazing poem.You are very talented.
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Thank you (again). This is one of my favourites, so I appreciate the fact that you think so.
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You're welcome(again).
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I like the idea of choosing between life and death in this poem.
The idea of choosing a road and never going back...
Well done
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Thank you. *bows dramatically*
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It reminds me of a book I read last year... The Shadow of Malabron, yeah, good read xD
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I'll look it up. (Don't wanna be a copy cat.)
Thanks for the faves BTW.
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No problem. Oh, it has nothing to do with your poem it just reminds me of it C:
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Oh, okay then. Thanks for letting me know.
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I was devistated (spell fail i think) when I heard about the gay suicides and then I feared it was one of my friends from 5th grade who was supposedly gay.
Lovely poem!
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Yeah, it's just horrible. On Oct. 20 people wore purple in rememberance, but I started on the 18th and have worn purple everyday since (usually in the form of Mardi Gras beads).
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I remember that. Everyone in my school wore purple, someone had to tell me ahead of time cuz I don't have a facebook. Also, I think Deviantart actually went purple too, for about a week.
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I would have loved to see that. Almost no one in my school wore it, even though they told me they would. 
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Even some straight guys I know wore purple. 
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Amazing! And my favorite color is purple so of course I wear some form of purple everyday (or I try to)
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Cool. My favourite colour is either teal or orange, I can never make up my mind. Not to mention I love how they contrast, so I like sticking them together. My room is teal with orange accents of course.
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Mine is purple *teehee* and it has Tim Burton pictures in it.
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I love his remake of Alice in Wonderland. Epic.
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I know right?! Also cause Johnny Depp is in it and I adore him as an actor.
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Love his Mad Hatter. I do like him in most of his stuff. Jack Sparrow, Willie Wonka, etc.
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The first time I saw Depp as Wonka I filpped cause it wasn't personally my fav movie, but now that I'm older I love it to bits!
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I think I like the original movie better, but they're both good. His Wonka was just a little, um, mentally disturbed, or disturbed me anyway. He was still good, but I don't think it fit the movie very well.
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Yeah, Deep Wonka was a lil wierd, the original is okay but the ommpa loompas creeped me out.
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I love Oompa Loompas. I should find a poster of them and stick it to my wall.
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