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AKsroa4a — Looking Through the Window
Published: 2010-12-27 18:44:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 218; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Looking on through my window,in misery,
from my life of unrest,
I see a place of happiness and amusement.
I'm stuck here,
in my world of confusion and strife,
I wish for an armistice,
in the war that is my life.
Hopeless am I,
with only my window,
though I feel it impossible,
I still stride for a door,
to that place,
of sanity.
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DUDE, i wrote a poem just like this!!!!! >.< this is freaky here it is
Peering from out your open window...
the rain drops cascade,
the moment you have is as a quick whisper.
Gazing at the clock's hands,
with nothing to hope or drive.
Closing your eyes to wish it back.
Watching the rinkles in the skies deepen,
melancholia in morn.
Not knowing when or what is and was?
it is almost the same in every stanza!? I'm paranoid freaked right now.
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That is weird. When did you write it? I wrote this back in July.
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Okay, so... Don't sue me! I didn't mean to do it!
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I won't... but it is very nice to see that you wrote something almost the same thing as i did, a person that i never knew!?
its like shooting two guns at once and aiming both bullets to hit each other when the other hunter never knew there was one hunter on the other side of the forest.
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similes makes my day as the sun shines upon the grain.
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yup.. i am sometimes known to speak in riddles while speaking.
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Hm. I actually speak in metaphors/similes, and not intentionally either.
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and people are all, "WHA????" after you speak right?
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i sometimes i just shut my mouth when it comes up. but than my step-dad's family loves the fact i speak in riddles XD... at work it is when my manager gets a weird face and i can't stand so i just mind my business. but its isn't good for me to hide my thoughts.
do you have that feeling? >.< its just my timidity.
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No. I speak the way I speak. I don't care what others think about it.
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//huggles// so much passion and confidence.
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did you know anyone else on DA as well? i have so many friends on here. but man your the first that i could relate too (like the poem we have that is almost alike @__@)
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You mean real-life or just at all?
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Well Dream-Catcher76 has become a friend on here. I know brodockoly from some other website. And I know angelXemoXgir in real-life.
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wow thats awesome. i also know some friends and relatives on here ^^ it is very nice that DA was made for us to connect our art.
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aren't you tired bro??? im about to fall for pillows
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Oh, no. I usually stay up til 2. Bad habit, I know. But I have a late school, and especially now, with school out and all.
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i was in home school from 8th grade and up and i lost my go to sleep early habits long time ago. Did you ever hear of Pa Cyber Charter School?
but i hope you get good enough sleep
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No, I haven't. I wish I could go to an online school, but then I'd have really bad work habits. I already don't do my homework (yet I still get straight As, so I'm not worrying, and Homework passes), what would I do when it's all homework!
Eh, I get irritable, but I'm always irritable, sleep or not. Though it seems the less sleep I get, the better my mood. Weird.
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Thats what my mom thought would happen to me, "you will slack off more than you are now!" surprisingly after i missed a month of school from pneumonia my mom was frustrated on how the school system helped me to get all caught up. I cramed, studied my brains out, did home work everyday, and I passed with A's and B's w/o their help.
some teachers thought i'd fail the year but i kicked their asses!!!!
So online school was better, the classes were double hard and faster. the regular classes were like the honors and honors were college level! I lost weight, sweat and bled my way up to b's to A's and i was an honor roll student. At my senior year I had all my classes done and I just took languages to fill in the gaps for boredom sake. I took German, Latin, and Italian... and I forgot Study of Contemporary Music trends (which i finished in a month)
I can say online school is for self determined students or lazy bums... it all matters on how the class it. I had a boring history class that murdered my goal for honor roll in 10th grade and i hated that class. the damn font for the book was BIBLE FONT!!!! so tiny and boring >.<;;; i stayed up all night reading and reading and nothing was accomplished. But for me in regular school i would have gotten worse and my grades would have dropped, i was bored and i began to goof off. I helped others with their home work but it wasn't enough for me to thrive for so PA cyber saved me.
and i just wrote you my thesis on Online School ^^
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XD sorry to draw out my mind there... i LOVE to type and write.
but cyber school was awesome. do you enjoy school?
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Some parts of it, yes. Some parts, no. Like Gym class, I loathe to no end. On the other hand, I love Geometry (I correct the teacher all the time). Speaking of my Geometry teacher, she had a dream of me! 
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HAHAHAHA, i had dreams of my teachers. lol so funny... most of my poems are from my dream!
I didn't do geometry, i did algebra (1 and 2) and almost got to Cal. Physics was when I did some Cal...
Gym class was fun for me. I lost my 70 pounds and i wasn't scared to take showers any more or get physical. I was normally picked for volley ball and other sports that had tactics, and i built barriers and defenses for my team. Football i hated but Ultimate frisbie i loved <333. People called me the Geek/Jock. i even took my glasses off to give me a jock look with wrists bands and played the role... lol so many funny faces. and the girls dropped their mouths.
popularity wasn't such a thing that mattered with me but when i acted myself and not posed as others people came to me. though it was with help on school work or questions about other matters. I was a omni-popular with all the groups being able to mix and shade to others. but some hated it and i lost some friends from being a friend to an enemy :<
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I can never remember my dreams. The last dream I remember was the Earth with a huge lightning rod coming out the North Pole. Then a lotus flower enveloped the planet. Yeah...
Here Geometry is mandatory to graduate high school. Though I'm taking it in 8th grade, and I already passed the HSA, so my math requirements are done.
I stink at every sport imaginable, except speed skating, but we can't afford skates, so that's out of the question. I think the reason I do so bad is because I have a fear of physical contact. Like social touching blah blah blah is fine by me, but I don't feel like getting body slammed.
Yeah, once I came out and started expressing myself I did get a little boost in popularity, but I get the feeling that it was because of that Hollywood fab of the "gay best friend." I find it annoying; we're not some accessory, we're people! And what's funny is that I'm top in my class (I have the top grade in Health, Science, Geometry, US History, and the 4th in English), but no one really askes for my help for school matters.
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oh my dreams are very vivid.
like last night i was stuck on a tropical island and some of the natives were 'chosen'. I was like "WTF 'chosen'?" One day i was the chosen. when you are chosen you are given a order to walk over a steep volcano mouth (which isn't real life possible from the heat) but i passed and when i did... i was given the duty to keep the waters over the huge tropical island regulated. Some were given duty's as building houses, keeping the land protected, hunting, and growing and harvesting produce, but mine was to the waters. As i learned later when you are chosen you can't leave the island, you can't be with anyone else but other 'chosen'. I thought "okay, keeping the water clean, fluid, and not flooding isn't bad." But as the chief given me my duty after the discourse i turned dramatically into a soluble liquid and at that thrashed into the sea. I could than breathe under water, control water around me and let it rain for the inhabitance. but i fell in love with the air regulator that was rude and stubborn and i sent a rainfall to tease and coax her down to me. she thought i was funny and very obnoxious, but loved me also. so we ruled together creating weather and tides for the people.
i have to make a story for this ^^
so most of my dreams are almost prophetic?! if i can describe it that way?
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Wow, you should make a story about that. Your subconscious has quite the imagination.
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but i am happy you have such a good determination and self!
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from what you said, "I came out and started expressing myself I did get a little boost in popularity, but I get the feeling that it was because of that Hollywood fab of the "gay best friend." I find it annoying; we're not some accessory, we're people!" i loved that.... very pronouncing and powerful!
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Oh, yeah. 
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i have a email with lambda in in. actually its my favorite greek letter after omega and before alpha.
it also hold significance in physics/chemistry for nuclear energy and radioactivity.
lambda.burst@yahoo.com
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Did not know that.
My favourite Greek letter is (by name) omicron, or (by look) psi.
Cool email.
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with having an 'a' you can guess mine is alpha...
im gonna draw a lambda than ^^
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