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Published: 2011-03-26 06:59:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 3
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Description Stare at the flickering flame,
on the wick,
of the candlestick.

Sit there and stare,
the burning fire,
inspires a deep desire.

I want to be like the wax,
in heat - flow,
and in light - glow.

Wax can be strong,
it just needs to cool,
and quit being a fool.

Drip down the side,
of the candlestick,
as the flames lick.

Is that the candles tears?
They must be tears of joy,
the flare casts such a happy ploy.
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Comments: 14

ravenwitch23 [2011-05-10 23:40:45 +0000 UTC]

amazing ^-^

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AKsroa4a In reply to ravenwitch23 [2011-05-28 20:59:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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ravenwitch23 In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-05-29 00:26:21 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^^

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kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-10 19:11:06 +0000 UTC]

loved the imagery

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AKsroa4a In reply to kallia-goldenwings [2011-05-28 20:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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MrsDerekSouza [2011-05-10 12:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Makes me want to break my promise xD

If youre curious what that means check out my poems <3

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frozen-fyre [2011-05-10 12:10:51 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea of an Auroralune support group collection. XD I'll get started on some stuffs right away. :3

*hugs both writer and writee* Love you guys. ^^

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facile-guise [2011-03-26 21:46:20 +0000 UTC]

: P
that was really sweet of you, thomi....
i think we should make an "Auroralune Support Group Collection"...xD i've written a few for her too........

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AKsroa4a In reply to facile-guise [2011-03-27 07:15:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Sure.

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anima12897 [2011-03-26 19:24:25 +0000 UTC]

yayay the wax poem! yes..., i have her in my thoughts too!

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AKsroa4a In reply to anima12897 [2011-03-26 19:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Yup, itz ze wax poemz. What'd ya think?

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anima12897 In reply to AKsroa4a [2011-03-26 20:35:48 +0000 UTC]

I really adore the rhyming bro! And i like how you made the wax a fruit of happy tears of candles.

I asked some people once, "do you think tears are warm and then cold...?" and you answered it well, by your poem! *huggles you*

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Auroralune [2011-03-26 07:03:54 +0000 UTC]

"Ploy" being the keyword...

I appreciate the poem..it's beautiful and creatively done, and I love candles...thank you thomi

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AKsroa4a In reply to Auroralune [2011-03-26 19:46:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, dear. I hope you feel better.

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