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Published: 2013-06-11 19:31:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 275; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 3
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Description Awake too early, I survey
unpeopled streets. The curtains
have smoothly withdrawn
to expose the picture window.

From the seventh floor
the view plunges vertiginously
into the canyon of the narrow street.

Already the morning has laid out
my solitude, that dull robe
that smothers my invisible days.

the brickwork walling the street
fades toward nonentity. Uncertainties
of recollection taunt me.

Briefly I wonder if you have already stirred,
before I recollect how this indifferent spring
morning marks for you
the onset of a winter night.

Completely separated. You will never
be an intimate part of me again.
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Comments: 19

Hermetic-Wings [2013-07-20 09:46:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh! up to the last words I was feeling the feelings of a lonely man but finally I understood that he / she was not alone formerly...Thanks for sharing your wonderfuly combined words dear Alec...

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AlecBell In reply to Hermetic-Wings [2013-07-20 10:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your comment, Ayhan

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Hermetic-Wings In reply to AlecBell [2013-07-22 12:12:27 +0000 UTC]

My pleaseur dear Alec

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AlecBell In reply to Hermetic-Wings [2013-07-22 16:29:43 +0000 UTC]

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Hermetic-Wings In reply to AlecBell [2013-07-22 20:56:37 +0000 UTC]

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haijinik [2013-06-27 18:51:02 +0000 UTC]

it starts with that early morning feeling of rapture missed and ends with that late night feeling of total isolation...full circle so to speak. perfectly worded, paced and constructed, alec!

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AlecBell In reply to haijinik [2013-06-27 21:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Chris

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GrannyJae [2013-06-17 20:36:29 +0000 UTC]

a heart-hitting wander through the early morning blues...

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AlecBell In reply to GrannyJae [2013-06-17 21:26:00 +0000 UTC]

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LancelotPrice [2013-06-12 19:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Very well done. Fine capture of the mood of non-reward and waste.

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AlecBell In reply to LancelotPrice [2013-06-13 10:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much, Lance

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LancelotPrice In reply to AlecBell [2013-06-13 14:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Truly my pleasure, Alec.

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Trippy4U [2013-06-12 07:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Well written Alec

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AlecBell In reply to Trippy4U [2013-06-13 10:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Bien sur, Richard

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Metal-Bender [2013-06-12 02:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful Alec!

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AlecBell In reply to Metal-Bender [2013-06-12 06:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Peggy

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Metal-Bender In reply to AlecBell [2013-06-13 02:07:57 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome Alec!

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EvilMeli [2013-06-11 20:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Damn those recollections that sneak into a wonderful and poetic and observations.

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AlecBell In reply to EvilMeli [2013-06-11 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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