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Description In the cities they were beginning to tally the cost of victory, gained at last after years of destructive struggle.

Surveyors were already appraising the mutilated buildings, Managers were directing the necessary demolition of building shells that remained precariously upright. Gangs of the brawnier survivors were using rubble to fill the pot-holes in the roads. Some of the labourers working had been drafted in,part of the first deployment of troops awaiting demobilisation now part of the Army Of Reconstruction.

From the city council down, everyone was eager to erase the evidence of a madness, a grotesque mutual insanity that had laid waste to the civilisation of a continent, spawning  numberless tribes of orphans.

There were reunions. Grizzled men, who had been living on time borrowed at they knew not what rate of interest, were beginning to return, seeking information about the survivors of their clans and families .These men, who had played their part in the destruction of their defeated enemy's cities, struggled to comprehend a townscape, once familiar, transformed  beyond hope of recognition.

They found it hard to believe that such destruction had been accomplished. Even as they bombarded the enemy's citadels, using  the might of mechanised artillery, they knew, they had seen the infernal landscape left behind after the  the night blooms had flowered, bright as the noonday.

But this was where home once had been, the home they had dreamed of, where their children were loved and nourished,where stoic mother had made the sacrifices necessary to keep  their vulnerable off-spring safe..They must have known how fiercely their enemy would retaliate, yet they stubbornly believed in that distant safe haven, that home to which they would return.

Some few of them, already choking on the fruits of victory, learned how their progeny had been crushed and burned on the night of the first surprise attack Could they, they asked them selves, take comfort from the foreign cities that had been destroyed  absolutely by weapons as powerful as the benign, yet flaming, distant sun? Those cities would never be reconstructed, the very ground remaining toxic for generations to come.

They knew that the vaporisation of whole populations could do nothing to restore reality to a remembered smile.
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TheDarkenedBride [2014-03-12 19:07:18 +0000 UTC]

One would hope the survivors would learn from the past... but will they ever?

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AlecBell In reply to TheDarkenedBride [2014-03-13 01:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Having taught 20th century history to 16+ students, I ralisd that there was no moredepressing subject!

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magbhitu [2014-03-06 02:37:05 +0000 UTC]

people who dream of apocalypse should be told it already happened - it's called WW2.   - i like that last line that weighs the personal and the mass

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AlecBell In reply to magbhitu [2014-03-06 12:21:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, John

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LancelotPrice [2014-03-05 16:54:52 +0000 UTC]

A couple of small typographical corrections>

"Stanza" [ ] 5, third from the last word should be 'bright' instead of 'bight'.

"Stanza" 7, word 7 should be either 'on' or 'in' rather than just 'n'.

There is also a missing 'i' in your comment> "the little town I lived n" But the 'i ' key seems generally to be working, so...

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AlecBell In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-03-06 00:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Lance, very helpful

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LancelotPrice In reply to AlecBell [2014-03-06 01:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Glad to have been of service.

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AlecBell In reply to LancelotPrice [2014-03-06 12:09:48 +0000 UTC]

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