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Esoteric-Epoch [2012-07-17 18:29:47 +0000 UTC]

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I'd have to admit here that your overall placement of things here was brilliant, aside from maybe having had your subject lean slightly to their right to center their body in the window frame. Everything else beyond that slight asymmetry to it is impeccable in my honest opinion. You could maybe work on your lighting a bit to bring out the golden browns of that wooden scenery whilst still secluding your subject in shadow, the more you could succeed at this the more mysterious I'd think the shrouded one would become. Perhaps some multiple focus interlacing post-work is in order for a shot like this, to achieve such the affect you are going for. (Someone in shadow while surrounded by light)

All around I enjoy your concept here, you had a good idea and your execution was well thought-out.

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daxusx [2012-10-23 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]

this is a fantastic fantastic work!!

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MilkyBerry [2012-07-27 18:36:12 +0000 UTC]

De toute la série pour le moment parue, celle-ci est ma préférée ! Tant pour la composition, le cadrage, que la lumière. Le fait que ce soit pris en plein jour, avec la grande fenêtre derrière, permet de beaucoup mieux faire ressortir le personnage et ses grands yeux... Et rend le tout vraiment "flippant", à faire froid dans le dos !

Bref, un grand bravo pour le concept et pour cette oeuvre

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