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AlexisRoyce — Jekyll Summoned

Published: 2008-10-21 03:38:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 2553; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 20
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Description Ah-aaaahhh...

His form was taffy, not ripping, but every inch felt like it was going to at any moment, left on the edge of annihilation, too scared to move or pull away, lest his struggle provide the necessary counter-force to tear him apart.

Something was very wrong with this, and it was more than just the pain. He felt the last warmth of purgatory's flames recede, and the cold rush of wind chilled him to his core. That place was agony, but ever endured, ever barely enough to stand, with the promise of Heaven somewhere off in the distance. But this new pain was different, and held none of the promises that the purifying fire did. Henry Jekyll tried not to scream at the thought of where he might be going, at the thought of what might happen to him.

He materialized, and screamed anyway. He could feel his spirit solidifying, and the terror of his soul was old and familiar. These were hands he had, and toes beginning to grow from his feet. He kept screaming, his heart too weak to stop. He knew what had happened, he'd read far too much about souls when he was alive to not understand.

He'd been summoned back to earth, and returned to life. Returned to stack more sin on top of the mountain of terror he'd committed his first time 'round. The light around him began to ebb, as well as the awful pulling sensation. He was slumped forward on the ground, tied and bound, but managed to raise himself up enough to peer through his hair. Being unclothed was once again improper, his freshly moral sensibilities reminded him, but worse was the feeling of eyes watching his naked form. He looked through the curtain of hair on his face to see shadowy figures around him, and one other naked human in a similar circle to his own.

The other man was glaring at Henry, the evident hatred in his eyes made all the more unnerving by the presence of scarlet irises. Henry thought that he might possibly remember this face, but oddly enough the form looked incredibly familiar, as if Henry had often seen this man naked. He felt himself flinch at the idea, wondering if it had been some poor young man that Edward had-

Henry's eyes widened. Yes, that was right. He'd never really seen that body, but Edward had every day. Edward's eyes saw warmth as well as light, and that particular body had never been visible through Henry's normal eyes, but Edward was able to see the unseen, to see that which was invisible, but oh so warm to the touch-

The face was familiar. It was the presence of hair, of skin instead of greasepaint, of teeth, and most strikingly, of commanding red eyes where there had once been hollow, dead holes. Those eyes had never been there as a hint, only a dark baritone of a voice to warn what the mind underneath was capable of doing. But they were there now, blazing back at him brighter than the candles that offered the room's light, and Henry wanted to look away, he needed to look away right now but those eyes wouldn't let him go, they were going to hold onto Henry Jekyll for as long as they could, they were going to repay him for the most wretched and cruel method of their owner's demise.

Henry's limbs were bound, and he could barely move to see, let alone cover his prone figure from the dubious forms around him. The door of the dingy room was locked and barred with three beams of metal, and occult symbols cluttered the floor, drawn in chalk and erased to make room for new ones, ghost images of the old still faintly visible. But the worst was to be the least expected: that another man, also naked, bound, and in the same situation, would hold strike more fear into Henry's chest than the rest combined. No matter what could come of the things around him, the worst of all was unspoken-

-and lay in those red eyes.

Not much else to say, really. It's all in the companion to this picture: [link]
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Comments: 27

queenOFcorn1994 [2010-08-23 20:19:58 +0000 UTC]

This is an awesome storyline! You should definitely continue it! Or if you already have continued it further please direct me to it

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AlexisRoyce In reply to queenOFcorn1994 [2010-08-25 11:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I really would like to do more with it, but the person I'd want to write it with is busy right now, and at the moment I'm able get my lit fix working on Sire.

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queenOFcorn1994 In reply to AlexisRoyce [2010-08-28 14:02:46 +0000 UTC]

I understand Just keep working hard! I really love all your work!

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AlexisRoyce In reply to queenOFcorn1994 [2010-08-28 22:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^_^ I'll keep the comics coming.

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queenOFcorn1994 In reply to AlexisRoyce [2010-08-29 03:09:24 +0000 UTC]

hurray!!!

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Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-22 19:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I forgot to ask in my previous comment:

Are you planning on doing anything more with this? Because seriously, it's amazing, and I want MORE! And if you are, where does Hyde come in, if at all? Cause the way Henry was talking about remembering through Hyde's eyes almost made it appear as if he wasn't there anymore or something.

Or I'm overanalyzing this to the extreme.

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-22 20:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, the question of Edward. It's very complicated, and I have an idea I like a LOT for the rest of this (which will probably have something done with it). Will Edward be in this? Short answer: No. Long answer: yes. But long answer is long and spoilery, and for now, you'll have to do with a bit of cryptic-ness. (Don't worry, it should be awesome when you do find out, if I do say so myself.)

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Poohbearlover42 In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-23 02:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Ooo! Ok, I'm game for some mystery! Can't wait to see what else you do with this!

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Beebo [2008-10-22 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God.

OOOOH my good, golly GOSH!

....This is bloody fantastic!

I've been inspired. I...I need the number of whatever model you used for his pose. Like...Now!

Unless it's Henry himself, then maybe you could arrange a little chat between us--?

St. John: Sweet baby Jesus in golden fleece diapers! The woman's not a pimp, Beebo!

*pokes fingers together* ...I know that.

....*mimes "phone" gesture at Henry* 8D

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Beebo [2008-10-22 13:05:36 +0000 UTC]

Henry: *Coughs and makes sure that his already stiff-necked collar is as high as it will go.*

As you might have guessed from his reaction, there was no model for this picture, just the pose in my mind's eye.

Henry: *mutters* ...feel so damned exposed...

Griffin's used to being naked, and even in a situation like his picture, he stops to think:

Griffin: Are there any women around who might be interested in what they see?

But after the shock of being summoned dissapates, Henry will be left with:

Henry: DON'TLOOKATMEDON'TLOOKATMEEEE!

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Beebo In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-23 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]

*huggles Griffin* No need to feel unconfident!

And Henry, you do realize that by stating such a direct order in so frantic a fashion will only bring about the opposite reaction, right?

Jane: ...Unfortunately, she has a point, Dr. Jekyll. *pointed looking up at the ceiling with a flushed face* Reverse psychology and all...*coughs*

Pfft! What d'you know? You're a therapist.

Jane: T.T

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otherwise [2008-10-22 04:37:39 +0000 UTC]

"as if Henry had often seen this man naked"
*snort*

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AlexisRoyce In reply to otherwise [2008-10-22 05:11:46 +0000 UTC]

It's an eternal dilemma: how to introduce nakedness without making things sexual.

Strike that. Too sexual.

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otherwise In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-25 06:59:34 +0000 UTC]

TOO sexual? What madness is this?

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Mizamour [2008-10-21 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

WHOA! This is amazing! Your writing is wonderful as always, and your characters - you bring new life to them, literally here!

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Mizamour [2008-10-22 01:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Ah, I really want to do Nano this year. I miss writing. But luckily, I should be doing a creative writing class next semester, so I'm looking forward to that.

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Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-21 19:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh man. I thought the OTHER picture was amazing! (which, of course, it defiantely still is) But this! This is just so...powerful! I think my favorite part of the whole picture is his face, particularly his eye. Great expressive communication. The lighting only adds to the awesome.

The only thing I have to say that kind of distracts from the overall effect is that purple light coming up from the summoning circle. It just kind of looks...rushed, you know? Kinda like you just drew something there instead of fully integrating it into the rest of the feel of the piece, you know? (and if it's not ok for me to say anything, just like, ignore me, k?)

My FAV has got to be the writing under there! You're just so damn good at writing from Henry's perspective! Like, it's awesome. Just...yeah, awesome.

I WANTS MOAR PLZ!

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-22 01:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't worry at all, you can put me down on your list of people who not only accept critiques, but are highly grateful for them. So thank you very much! Moreover, you're absolutely right; I didn't take the patience and care on this spell that I did on the other one, and it does show. It's another strong reminder for me to take my time, and never rush any aspect of a piece, especially one like this.

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Poohbearlover42 In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-22 18:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok, good, cause some people on here get so like, "RAWR IMMA GONNA EAT YOUR HEAD" at constructive critcism. I'm glad you're not one of them.

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-22 19:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I understand totally, and I think that it's wise of you to be a little on edge when you give a critique, because there's always the possibility that someone could lash out. But I know that taking criticism well is an important part of being an artist, so even though it can be irksome if I'm in a bad mood or something, I want to be able to always take it well, even from people who put their comments poorly (not a problem with yours, of course. Even in a wretched mood, I don't think I'd be angry at yours. ^_^).

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Poohbearlover42 In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-22 19:13:53 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha aww thank you! I give it out because I want to help out, and also so that I might get some feedback on my own work too, you know? (even if I have been like, dead on here deviantion wise for while...*shifty look*) Cause favs are always appreciated and stuff, but being given useful suggestions on how to improve will do just that: help you improve, you know?

Sorry, little tangent there!

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Poohbearlover42 [2008-10-22 20:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, crits are always the best. Favorites pump up your ego, but crits whittle you to a fine point.

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botafly [2008-10-21 14:17:47 +0000 UTC]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

I can't stop saying how much I adore your coloring. Especially with the difficult light source you chose. And the ficlets that came with these are keeping me wanting moooooore. Curse you for making me want more!

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AlexisRoyce In reply to botafly [2008-10-21 18:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahaha! You cannot resist the allure!

Sadly, neither can I, and that's why I didn't go to bed until early morning last night (errr, this morning) because I needed to finish this picture and then my two other art assignments. And now, I have more ideas.

This doth not bode well.

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Hatted-Halfling [2008-10-21 12:36:24 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Man, until I read the Griffon Summoned story, I thought you were talking about Hyde in the second circle - that Henry and Hyde had been summoned seperately! But this is amazing! And fascinating! And I'm really hoping you'll write and/or draw more! (I'm really hoping for the writing...) I like how dynamic this picture is compaired to Griffin's - you really capture the terror Henry's feeling in that moment of summoning. Especially in his eye... Can't wait to see what you do next!!! ^^!

Trickster

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AlexisRoyce In reply to Hatted-Halfling [2008-10-21 18:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, and double for the favorite!

I wanted to do something slightly earlier in the summoning with Henry. It's just a difference of about ten seconds, but Henry's still arriving here, whereas Griffin is almost there in his pic.

I've got more ideas. Lots more. My homework and webcomic may be in trouble.

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Hatted-Halfling In reply to AlexisRoyce [2008-10-23 14:15:50 +0000 UTC]

No prob! ^^! Looking forward to seeing your ideas!

Trickster

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