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And in this dark harvest of season
My life has completely lost reason,
For which or against to decide.
All lost in a savage and endless, bleak tide

In sadness and in kindness
In light and in darkness.
In a boat made of hope
I shall sail to tomorrow,
In a winding hurricane
Made of treachery and sorrow.

There's a spear, endless, and colossal spear...
Piercing, slashing though my head.
Starting somewhere in heaven,
Ending somewhere in hell.
Fighting, burning, crying, crashing.
Are the armies within.
In my head they are all thrashing.
On the heaven's and hell's whim.
To be light or to be darkness.
A perpetual array.

It's not merely my choice,
But the choice of the way.
It's an option of the voice,
It's a thin line of gray.

Is it a choice forced by fate,
Is it a pre-set time and date?
Or a choice to which I myself sway?
But here's our story anyway….

"Nothing that I do will matter.
As all things will merely shatter!"
All my hopes thus darkness scatter,
As it shoves me a decree.
As it simply wants to win,
And to just take over me.

"Have a purpose, bend the world,
Act out upon your wishes, and ______ will love you a lot"
That's what light then says to me,
Because it wants to set me free.
Winning slightly over me.

"But this cage of gold so shiny, it will shield you from untrue
And protect you from the odd,
Nothing inside its walls can harm you,
In your own little world!"
Whispers darkness in my ear,
"Only me you should now hear,
And with me you will survive,
And with my help you will strive,
And achieve your paradise,
In illusion's disguise!
With no hardships and no pain,
Every task you will then tame!"

The light sternly yells at me:
"These are lies as they can be!
If your world is built on lies,
Then yourself you will despise.
And illusion's paradise,
Will fall down on you.
Crashing, burning, dying, crying are your dreams
And uprooted is your tree!
And no longer will you see
Where to go or what to be!
When you face your final trial, what will the judge say to thee?"

"These are lies and mere dogma,
Based upon the fear of death!"
Darkness then just yells at me:
"You have your right to disagree!
Make a lovely pact with me.
I will offer you salvation,
No more fear or deprivation!
If you would me then just hear,
You have nothing at all to fear.
Since we do not have a soul.
There's nothing with which to pay a toll!
Sign here, over there.
In the name of pleasure and hope.
In the name of revolution,
Let your path be just a gentle slope!"

Its arguments are winning over me,
And thus with darkness I agree,
And so I sign the decree,
And with a treacherous and jolly glee
Darkness enshrouding, standing over me
"With the light here once and for all undone
You and I shall become one!"

And so, I enter into the storm of shadows.
As pitch-black as the depths of sea.
Become a mere castaway, amidst the weary crowds.
Consumed by somber, ashen clouds,
With heavens frowning over me.

A storm of ice and fire, dancing all around with a glee.
A ring chrono-storm encapsulating me.
Just like a stove turned up to high degree.
Tearing up roads, buildings, picking up debris.
Into the air it takes me.
My wings have turned to blackened ash
The pacifying, freezing fear taking over
My heart is covered in frost
And all I wished, is to be free…

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Comments: 1894

LadyOfKalonis [2012-05-27 01:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Almost made me cry.

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Csunshine3231 [2012-05-06 06:19:16 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful, kinda makes me think of the show supernatural

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Omikami-Sama [2012-05-05 00:19:22 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. I love it.

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TheSerb94 [2012-05-04 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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ArbitraryFate [2012-05-04 22:05:07 +0000 UTC]

One word: Wow.

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Frostlines [2012-05-04 11:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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danis58 [2012-05-03 21:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Really beautiful β™₯

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TheFlyingMoule [2012-05-03 17:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Woo, love it!

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soumithebest2006 [2012-04-01 12:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Very talented dude. Loved it.

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NickTheGoon9 In reply to ??? [2012-03-31 19:53:53 +0000 UTC]

This Is Completely Amazing.

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TheJSX2 In reply to ??? [2012-03-30 20:32:49 +0000 UTC]

intresting

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Dobelin In reply to ??? [2012-03-30 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't be more perfect.

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blueisme In reply to ??? [2012-03-29 03:31:23 +0000 UTC]

just want to point out here, most popular piece of literature in "all time" on DA. and its that way for a reason

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novelist888 In reply to ??? [2012-02-28 07:47:18 +0000 UTC]

Love your work!!!

This is my website [link] Check it out!!!

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HgCrazyAlchemyKid In reply to ??? [2012-02-25 16:37:24 +0000 UTC]

0_0 I <3 this

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Arkenna In reply to ??? [2012-02-25 13:07:58 +0000 UTC]

wow

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sonatabrej In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 14:55:50 +0000 UTC]

I think im falling in love with u.

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DokanManiac In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 00:05:08 +0000 UTC]

and beautifull...

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DokanManiac In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 00:04:52 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah and amazing :>

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DokanManiac In reply to ??? [2012-02-24 00:04:33 +0000 UTC]

cool nice awesome wow..... that sums up like 95% of all comments here
my work hereis done....

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jzjad In reply to ??? [2012-02-23 18:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Awesome amazing no doubt !!

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akkonitova In reply to ??? [2012-02-23 10:06:06 +0000 UTC]

wow.....it is amazing!
great...!

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Charradea In reply to ??? [2012-02-23 07:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great!

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matejoto In reply to ??? [2012-02-23 05:11:47 +0000 UTC]

This is truly amazing. TRULY.

The picture, and the poem. I'm stunned with the awesomeness.

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Lockwork [2012-02-23 01:16:55 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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xMidnightKittyx [2012-02-22 23:40:19 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful!

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iloveFRIDGES [2012-02-22 20:43:18 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me of the Bible, how the Anti-Christ will deceive and win over some people's hearts because his way seems easier and better than what God wants, where actually the road he provides leads to corruption and destruction.

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BDStudio In reply to iloveFRIDGES [2012-02-25 10:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Indeed AND the end will be great for those who believe in Jesus Christ! amen ^^

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iloveFRIDGES In reply to BDStudio [2012-02-25 13:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Amen to that!

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NumberVII2 [2012-02-22 20:41:02 +0000 UTC]

That is SOOOO amazing. I love it.

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Slashman24 In reply to ??? [2012-02-22 15:00:31 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing. i wish i could write this...

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AmeNoKunrin In reply to ??? [2012-02-22 11:33:19 +0000 UTC]

It is... sad... and beautiful at the same time.
Congratulations!

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SunnyStarlight In reply to ??? [2012-02-22 10:58:47 +0000 UTC]

You're an amazing writer and artist. I'm so glad to have seen thiis!

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Agunimon1000 [2012-02-22 06:09:17 +0000 UTC]

Really amazing and inspiring.. love it

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Madbootdude [2012-02-22 06:01:15 +0000 UTC]

That's Amazing!

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Iseabeau [2012-02-22 04:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Astonishing

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akcardoso [2012-02-22 04:13:23 +0000 UTC]

Great in so many ways... <3

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freeourworld [2012-02-22 03:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Don't like at all, good writing technique HATE the message......

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alexiuss In reply to freeourworld [2012-02-22 07:57:44 +0000 UTC]

lol what message is there?

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HAYRE In reply to alexiuss [2012-02-22 11:31:42 +0000 UTC]

I think he means darkness winning over light, bad winning over evil. It is a great poem! Well done man. And I like the way its done like a conversation going on between you light and dark. As tough they are over your shoulders.

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avispadator [2012-02-22 03:09:15 +0000 UTC]

quite interesting i must admit
i could easily feel it like my own heart beat
there is nothing else to fear
let the darkness become your spear
with it the light you can defeat
and it shall become a dish of meat
i fear nothing i know for sure
but how much treachory can you endure ?

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misteryA555 [2012-02-22 00:15:55 +0000 UTC]

I hope to one day write as amazing as you
<3
This would be a great book!

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Fireflyinvader-29 [2012-02-21 23:15:24 +0000 UTC]

I was excepting at the end, "My name is Lufecer-y" XDD Sorry Beautiful poem very beautiful

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Azira268 [2012-02-21 21:51:39 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful

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CharlightArt [2012-02-21 17:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Poetic brilliance!

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WarmWishes [2012-02-21 16:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Have you given rights for this app to use your work because I’ve found this piece in an app called β€œCool Wallpapers HD & Retina Free,” after typing β€œAngel” in the search, on the 11th page. Might be good if you check the rest, just in case they’ve taken more. Hope I helped, I don’t like people taking advantage of others work =/
For more security, maybe you’d like to join my group; for more eyes and ears checking for your work? Help us crack down on the violators!

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alexiuss In reply to WarmWishes [2012-02-21 17:13:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool Wallpapers HD & Retina Free is obviously an app that steals artworks.
what device is this app for, be more specific please?

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WarmWishes In reply to alexiuss [2012-02-21 17:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, Its on Iphone/Ipod touch

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alexiuss In reply to WarmWishes [2012-02-21 17:43:38 +0000 UTC]

aight.
Your group is really small and I'm on my limits of group joining and I can't join new groups. The limit is really limiting and stupid.

I suggest you join my group: and I can make you admins - that way you can make your fight heard by it's 2000+ watchers.

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WarmWishes In reply to alexiuss [2012-02-21 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks , Did you find it by the way?

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