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awkwardLAD [2010-11-16 02:11:23 +0000 UTC]
The girl on the left is adorable. She has like the exact same haircut as my girlfriend.
Nice colors, btw!
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Wargreymon88 [2010-09-19 02:37:31 +0000 UTC]
I've actually read up to where kigo has there third kid in KIY's story, but that's as far as I have gotten cause of his backwards story methods. I like his stories but making it more stream line would help readers keep track of what is happening when.
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Wargreymon88 In reply to Alexlayer [2010-09-19 18:15:03 +0000 UTC]
your welcome for the fave. The listing does help but some of then are mentioned as he goes to fill in certain areas. Where you have to stop reading one and begin another through and through to have a full understanding of the situation. Prime example is the third kid in the grocery incident (forgive me. I've read too many Kigo fics to keep of which author used what name for the kids outside of Kasy and Sheki.). The birth story for her was... beyond interesting. I like the outcomes, even if all but one of them was saddening. They showed jsut how emotional Shego can really be.
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Alexlayer In reply to Wargreymon88 [2010-09-19 18:48:19 +0000 UTC]
"The Other Path", KiY's story where Jane is born, is likely the most dissapointed I've ever been with one of his stories. It was well writte, but not well built, specially not as a "Choose your Path" type of story, since it was basically just one straight story with four alternative bad endings were the pregnancy happen to succumb to any of the obstacles on the way. Many of the deciding circunstanes weren't even decisions. And there weren't really any interesting paths other than the happy ending, such as, for example, since Shego wasn't suitable for bearing children, Kim deciding to take upon the test once again since they really wanted another child. Or an alternative ending where Shego did not have one child, but another set of twins. Anything that could make the reader desire something else beyond the happy ending. You know?
But... anyway, sorry, I'm ranting here.
Back to the chronological list. The number of episodes that go through many others, like R-E-S-P-E-C-T, are really few, and frankly, reading through the whole series chronologically by following the list should be just fine. That's what I did and it worked just fine to me. There were a couple of times where you get confused, but that much gets eventually clarified.
And well, here hoping this helps you. ^^
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Wargreymon88 In reply to Alexlayer [2010-09-19 21:59:25 +0000 UTC]
thank you, it does. oh I'm looking to start some fanfics. I'm considering putting out some previews, but I'd like some direction with them. I can send yah a list of general series their going to involve, but mostly looking for an opion run to figure which one I should really start putting up.
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Alexlayer In reply to Wargreymon88 [2010-09-21 02:24:17 +0000 UTC]
Having a direction to follow is something I seriously recommend before starting anything. Other than that, regarding that list you mention, what do you mean with "General series they're going to involve"? You mean, you got ideas for fanfics of different series? Or more like some sort of muti-crossover? Or do you mean fanfic series involving KiGo children and stuff?
Whatever the case, if you need some help in criticism and reviewing, I could help you so long as I'm familiar with whatever you're writting.
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Wargreymon88 In reply to Alexlayer [2010-09-21 07:22:37 +0000 UTC]
Well here's the intial list
One is in W.I.T.C.H. (it was disney just so yah know); Like 3-5 for Kim Possible; 2 more for Digimon Tamers (Season 3 of the show); and Finally my unique piece that has reality hopping, alternate universes, and reality mix ups. Granted the last two happen closer to where I am mentally in the story. The last has series rotations and crossovers for an little extra surprise that I added I toward my current point. The Genre/series for my unique piece inclue: Dungeons & Dragons, Digimon Tamers, Kim Possible, W.I.T.C.H., while also using some religous parsay references for an antagonist or two.
The KP ones do involve the Kigo kids as well a character I found from Yuri18 here on deviantart (Anna Lipsky). The Kigo kids I'm considering using are from NoDrogs' story line. Maybe use StarvingLunatic's Kigo kids in some of the fics I'll be making; may change depending on story.
Most of them that are series listed will not be doing crossovers. I prefer to make things go crazy in their worlds over spinning crossover stuff, with the exception of my unique piece.
Oh... Yes, I would to have someone to critize my work and possibly help get out for ppl to read. A mild warning though. I like to write stories that go a dark route most times.
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Alexlayer In reply to Wargreymon88 [2010-09-23 00:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Well, I've never seen W.I.T.C.H., but I'd do my best to help with the other two if you need it. Just tell me when you'll do anything.
Oh, and I don't mind dark routes, most of the time, at least.
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Lawrence66208 [2010-08-04 17:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Well, that probably just added a kiss that I hadn't planned on writing to the 2nd or 3rd chapter of Second Death. (Another kiss or two had been planned in the story, but this one had not been planned.)
Congratulations on getting through all of Best Enemies to date... Or at least all of it I have put into the chronological listing - now I need to go back and make sure that is up to date. If you aren't sick of my stuff by this point you can always try reading some of the non-BE stuff... Or put it off until after a break to clear your palette. (Or just forget it entirely if that works best for you.)
KiY
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Lawrence66208 In reply to Alexlayer [2010-08-04 22:05:07 +0000 UTC]
I said it inspired me! Doesn't that count for something? I was struck speechless by it... Yeah, that's my story and I'm sticking with it... (Of course, it is a little hard to defend when I did manage to hit the comment button and type something. But this won't be the first time I've left a gaping plot hole in a story.)
Oh, and before I forget again, loved the picture. Very nice. For Pete's sake - I already said it inspired me! I still say that counts.
KiY (And I wasn't thinking on the favorite bit. Too much in shock. Will do that now.)
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Levia-the-Dragon [2010-08-04 06:51:09 +0000 UTC]
Huh... I suppose that works...
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to Alexlayer [2010-08-04 10:40:55 +0000 UTC]
Say what now? Thatr wasn't dissaproal, that was me being distant, lost in thought...
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to Alexlayer [2010-08-05 08:38:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh... well it wasn't my intention, i was more contemplating other places wher eit might have been the case and how it raises questions about th enature of sexuality.
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Festum [2010-08-04 04:58:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this came out really well!
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RavinWood [2010-08-04 04:37:19 +0000 UTC]
were liknked at the brain, theres no other explination. id been toying around with that pairing in my mined for a will. i figered Hana might baby sit Sheki and Kasy tawords the end of KP-R befor the begening of KP-TNG and that hole 3 years apart sitter stiiy love thing may bloom. thow my Hanas more girly like Kim in a way.
ABOUT THIS PIC
i love this. its so romantick and cute. the close r so nice to. u and ur hole teem for that matter did great on this ^_^
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