Comments: 13
melb623 [2015-04-09 07:16:53 +0000 UTC]
I bawled my eyes out on that last chapter!! I'm hoping you know who get back together in your sequal if you ever plan on making one. I'm so in love!!
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Alexlayer In reply to melb623 [2015-04-16 19:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the comment. ^^
A sequel to this story is still in development, with the plot for it finally having gotten simple enough to be workable. Yeah, believe it or not, one of my biggest problems when writing is that things tend to get so complex they become impossible, and I often gotta remind myself of the main theme of the story, and revise how can I tell a story that conveys that theme and message that I want to show, and what things I need and don't need for it.
To give you an idea, the original concept for the sequel involved a full out war between three parties, Global Justice, Worldwide Evil Empire and the 12 Ninja schools of which Yamanouchi is only one of. As epic as that may sound, it's simply way too much conflict that's ultimately unnecesary for the story, so I've slowly managed to simplify things, now only involving Global Justice and Yamanouchi in a conflict where both parties attempt to do good, but they have very different phylosifies and methodologies about it, so they end up clashing, and as you can expect, Kim, Ron, Agni and Joss all end up trapped in this conflict.
What will it take to end this conflict? Have fun wondering about that.
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Skoshi8 [2013-08-22 22:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Up to chapter seven now.
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Alexlayer In reply to Skoshi8 [2013-08-23 21:26:12 +0000 UTC]
Uh? Oh, right, I haven't updated the comment there in a while. But... fic's actually been published up to Chapter 9. If you're reading, hope you're enjoying. ^^
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Lawrence66208 [2013-07-07 16:15:11 +0000 UTC]
Let's see if I can post before my internet crashes again. Really like this as a drawing. Good composition and I like the contrast between the characters, Kim looking rather calm (but slightly curious about what is going on behind her) and Agni's 'in your face' attitude.
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Blackbird2 [2013-07-05 19:03:32 +0000 UTC]
Very nice cover. I might actually have to reread May 13th before trying to read the new one cause I'm not sure I remember much of what happened in the first fic. Still the cover makes it look promising and the description does sound interesting.
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Blackbird2 In reply to Alexlayer [2013-07-06 01:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Well alright then. Whenever I do get around to reading it I'll be sure to leave a review.
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Alexlayer In reply to Deaku [2013-07-05 13:48:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Really glad it's over so I could finally start posting the fic around. ^^
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