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Chiekomeng [2019-01-10 11:01:14 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Technique
Impact
This is a visually stunning piece, and I want to say I absolutely love the depth and lighting in it. The emotion you were aiming for is clear and well executed, and amplified by the webbing in the foreground and background of the image.
Having said that, here are my concerns which are on the technical side of things.
The inclusion of a belly button mark makes me think this suit's material is extremely thin, or Spidey or someone has painted on this suit. (I mean, both are a possibility. Maybe he's worn the suit well past it's practical life. Or, maybe he's just coming back from an art installation that was about him, and the artist painted the suit on. Weirder things have happened in the Marvel universe. Weirder things have happened to Peter Parker.)
The lack of webbing in the costume (Which I see in one step, but not elsewhere) makes me feel like it was missed, and makes the image incomplete for me. I know there have been many versions of the suit, but the iconic blue and red seem like a vital part is missing when the webbing design over it is neglected.
The rest fall under artistic license for me, such as the size of those thighs. That spider is thick and it's believable simply due to the amount of use his legs get. As as character, though, I don't believe Spider-man was ever meant to be on the overly buff side of things. This again is a minor thing, and up to artistic vision.
I'd like to conclude that again, this piece is amazing. I love that you've shown us the process, and I love that use of his actual webbing. Spider-man is my all time favourite hero and you've really done him justice here.
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AlexRedfish In reply to CaptainBlackScales [2019-01-10 07:25:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback!
I would recommend Proko. He has a Youtube channel with free tutorials as well as a full paid course if you're interested.
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Sl9086 [2019-01-14 03:22:25 +0000 UTC]
Im really confused on the steps 5 and 6.
I know the flat colors but i dont get the gradient mask. Can i ask what did you do there?
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Ryuu-Orochi [2019-01-13 07:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Your art is an inspiration for me, thank you for this guide. It is very helpful in my studies to learning how to render.
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RobertSalgado [2019-01-12 21:26:18 +0000 UTC]
For the 4th step do you paint in the white again again??
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AlexRedfish In reply to RobertSalgado [2019-01-13 14:14:28 +0000 UTC]
The 4th step is on a separate layer, so there're 2 shadow layers in total.
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Absurdpotato [2019-01-11 04:08:11 +0000 UTC]
He looks like he is doing a jojo pose.
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spidermanelsa24 [2019-01-10 18:24:54 +0000 UTC]
ya i like spiderman
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JMDAroz [2019-01-10 16:24:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for sharing your process! <3
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fjl22 [2019-01-10 14:31:50 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful.
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Psycool [2019-01-10 14:18:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow great job and description!
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ahmed1510 [2019-01-10 13:41:08 +0000 UTC]
wow..!!
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EuclideanMan [2019-01-10 13:15:32 +0000 UTC]
Shouldn't the fourth white spiderman come before the shadowed third spiderman.
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AlexRedfish In reply to EuclideanMan [2019-01-10 17:09:05 +0000 UTC]
These are two separate shading layers. They are combined later before step 6. I'll try to make it a bit clearer next time.
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EuclideanMan In reply to AlexRedfish [2019-01-11 03:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow I never though of doing that! Thanks man!
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xXThe-Needed-ManXx [2019-01-10 09:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Fella you've made so interesting the process.Thanks.
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PoppyTsun [2019-01-10 08:48:20 +0000 UTC]
this looks amazing! i love the shading
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AxlionAuto [2019-01-10 08:14:34 +0000 UTC]
At first glance I thought ol' Spidey was in some kind of JoJo pose.
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MeetMeByTheSea [2019-01-10 06:03:56 +0000 UTC]
love the artwork, you should try writing, you have the wit
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3DbyMoon [2019-01-10 05:21:36 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work! it reminds me of the work by Mark Bagley or even Jim Lee, very detailed and well done on the anatomy, and expression, congratulations!
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lolmadz [2019-01-10 05:07:28 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful Job!
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Por-Justica [2019-01-10 05:05:22 +0000 UTC]
This is very amazing! It is inspiring to see how much love, and yes, how much effort, has gone in to this piece! From the pose, to the reflective highlights, it is powerful.
Truly you are an inspiration, I love it!
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Derpadork [2019-01-10 05:01:49 +0000 UTC]
I'm spooked.
The amount of time that went into this project and the drive you had to finish it must be amazing!
I love this, it's great to look at.
Even better, i'm inspired!
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sweetdreamz12 [2019-01-10 04:29:30 +0000 UTC]
VERY COOL!!!
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EarlyDarkE [2019-01-10 04:05:59 +0000 UTC]
what's the difference between PaintTool Sai and Photoshop?
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Redsundark [2019-01-10 02:42:24 +0000 UTC]
@_@ this is Super amazing
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tsumefan2 [2019-01-10 01:45:42 +0000 UTC]
it looks like he is thinking omg i am so high right now
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WilliamTarver [2019-01-10 00:10:52 +0000 UTC]
Great Work! One of my favorite Marvel characters!Make sure check out my new DeviantArt page!
I have Heroic art as well!
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LoveXPoints [2019-01-09 23:08:15 +0000 UTC]
So nice
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Argeshka [2019-01-09 21:35:57 +0000 UTC]
И как всегда ничего не получается xd
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keeprecording [2019-01-09 21:17:31 +0000 UTC]
1075 views in one day? Disregard my comment. I have nothing to contribute
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keeprecording [2019-01-09 21:14:56 +0000 UTC]
I was going to write a critique but it’s apparently 100 words minimum. But any ways I assume that you are a professional working in the industry. You are a far more advanced artist than I am. I think the piece, the one before the final is more eyecatching, the web stands out more, or the contrast is more pleasing to the eye. But then again I assume you want spiderman to be the first thing that catches the eye. So I wrote a whole paragraph only to communicate nothing. You’re work is very good
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MrMotley89 [2019-01-09 19:50:02 +0000 UTC]
good job!!
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AvantiNostalgia [2019-01-09 19:35:34 +0000 UTC]
Ого, спасибо, очень интересно! *_*
Немного не дошло по поводу 6 пункта. Вы создаете слой с заливкой теней и накладываете градиент через стиль слоя? Я правильно понимаю? (Пошла в фотошоп, попробовала, в роде получается)))
Я делаю нечто похожее, только градиент кладу на слое сверху через "обтравочную маску", тоесть, не создаю персеты градиентов, а "подгоняю" их кистями и прозрачностью, если это нужно. Также можно делать несколько слоев с градиентами, а не один, как у вас в примере.
Получается так:
А еще, очень понравилась поза персонажа, из-за нее и пришла на страницу работы.
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AvantiNostalgia In reply to AlexRedfish [2019-01-10 12:35:09 +0000 UTC]
Спасибо больше за объяснение!
Для меня это открытие (попробовала этот корректирующий слой и поняла, что он делает много полезного). Никогда не пользовалась им до этого, спасибо!
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Borsec11 [2019-01-09 18:24:22 +0000 UTC]
you are sick human .... nice work love it
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soulSmith1 [2019-01-09 16:53:04 +0000 UTC]
perfect
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Ishmari18 [2019-01-09 16:02:34 +0000 UTC]
I have a question, how did you do the transition on the 2nd bottom panel? I still love this though!
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