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Published: 2015-12-24 02:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1679; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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The two exit the depths of the forest and go on a montage of adventure! And we get to learn a little bit about this mom in the process.
Oh also things die.

My favorite comment on this page was "Yup. That deer definitely is drawn quite nicely dead."

I definitely think this page is my favorite of the bunch. Both because it was the less painful to me, but also just because it's simple but aesthetically pleasing. It's only four panels but I'm actually content with all the information I managed to pack in there. You can develop characters in one page. Who woulda thought!
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Comments: 20

Karbik [2016-02-24 17:27:50 +0000 UTC]

On one hand, it's kind of impressive how far her pup could have gone before she noticed her absence. On the other hand, momma mare is certainly more impressive of a hunting creature than she looks (did think her a herivore at first.)

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AlfaFilly In reply to Karbik [2016-02-25 02:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Aha, we had a fun discussion in my class about how she could have been distracted so long. We all came to the conclusion she was likely still running off as the mother was searching for her. Who knows how far she'd get if those thorns didn't trap her.
She's a strong old nag, I can say that much. That deer-thing couldn't have been easy to snag.

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Songdogx [2016-01-01 23:03:47 +0000 UTC]

The motion of the characters and the poses are great, especially love the deer running in the second to last panel. I also enjoy how momma's fur/hair droops down very naturally.

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AlfaFilly In reply to Songdogx [2016-01-11 01:54:46 +0000 UTC]

I swore I thought my teacher was going to have some sort of beef with the one deer having its rear in foreground focus but he didn't. It was a successful deer butt I guess.
Many thanks! ^^

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tbolt [2015-12-24 12:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Interesting aquatic life in the stream too!

Plus I think she needs a little more than a rat to go on anyways... =^^=

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AlfaFilly In reply to tbolt [2015-12-26 06:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! The fish were pretty fun to hybrid-ify. Even if the eel is just... two eels put together. But it's something!

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Night-The-Kitten [2015-12-24 03:34:16 +0000 UTC]

i love this omg

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AlfaFilly In reply to Night-The-Kitten [2015-12-24 03:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoooou!

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MrIHaveASword [2015-12-24 02:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Would not expect the bunny to be a predator.

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AlfaFilly In reply to MrIHaveASword [2015-12-24 03:45:49 +0000 UTC]

I like to imagine he's omnivorous. A nice rat main course with a side salad of berries and grass. Maybe some ants for a crunchy texture!

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MrIHaveASword In reply to AlfaFilly [2015-12-24 04:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Be a nice bit of protein, gonna keep him strong.

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Revanaska [2015-12-24 02:13:13 +0000 UTC]

Might I suggest the use of the word "wrecked"?

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AlfaFilly In reply to Revanaska [2015-12-24 02:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, like to replace "reckless" in panel one? Those are two different contexts though. One is instilling that she puts herself in dangerous situations or is careless. The other is just that she's... broken. Which she's clearly not despite her age xD Oh the irony.

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Revanaska In reply to AlfaFilly [2015-12-24 14:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, no, it was a joke about the last panel. Was saying that the smaller one got completely wrecked.

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AlfaFilly In reply to Revanaska [2015-12-24 19:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha the truth in that is beyond words xDD

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ArtsyGoatAlan [2015-12-24 02:12:37 +0000 UTC]

I like FoxBunny's face in the last panel. XD To me it's like "Oh shit, she really caught that?!"

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AlfaFilly In reply to ArtsyGoatAlan [2015-12-24 02:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Being shown up by an old nag can't feel too great to the ol' ego~ 8)

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ArtsyGoatAlan In reply to AlfaFilly [2015-12-24 03:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Definitely not. X3

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Painted-Panda [2015-12-24 02:03:28 +0000 UTC]

ded six legged deer is my aestheticΒ 

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AlfaFilly In reply to Painted-Panda [2015-12-24 02:22:20 +0000 UTC]

It's the best aesthetic at that! >:v

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