Kisshu4everK [2014-04-07 10:19:03 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you crossed these stories, adding parallels (some more obvious than others) and would definitely love to see you continue the story.
Though I'd advise you to slow the story down a bit.
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AliceOfTheRose In reply to Kisshu4everK [2014-07-20 06:29:23 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the late reply! I decided not to do anything else with the story, but thanks for your comment. ^^
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