Comments: 12
For89 [2016-01-15 01:10:53 +0000 UTC]
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To start off with the good, the picture is drawn very nicely, with very careful attention attended to the eyes and every little tuft of fur. however, it could be possible that a little too much attention went with the colors rather then the overall product. The painting itself looks pleasing enough, but there are some oddities. The face is very narrow in a sense, the head kind of squished from the top and the snout squished from the sides. The nose goes too far up the snout, so it gives the impression of an upturned face. The whiskers are too thick in clusters, and in general could've been thinner and more sparse. The ears are pretty far apart and giving with the off shape of the head, gives this wolf a very dog-like look if you know what I mean. The eyes are off-centered and gives the drawing a very sloppy look. Next is the paw, probably the worst out of all of them. One of the claws seems to be coming out of no where and the little toes aren't layered properly giving it the illusion of a hand. The paw itself is just very hand like and its awkward angle makes it difficult to understand what the wold is doing. If it was leaping, the paw would be bent the other way, while if it was stepping onto (stone? is that what it is?) then is would be more bent, and would require further layering in the toes. The fur on the paw also gives the impressin as if the wolf is sticking out his elbow, and the paw itself is sideways. If drawn properly the tufts would appear beneath the"arm" and wouldn't make such an awkward expression. Final verdict can be concluded as: good detail is shown but not in the anatomical sense.
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alienwar42 In reply to For89 [2016-01-15 13:39:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your thoughts on my drawing I agree with you on some of the flaws on this picture. I will take what you said and try to use that to improve on my work. Thanks againΒ
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MoonDoodles7 [2016-10-28 18:51:44 +0000 UTC]
Im not trying to be rude or anything but why is there a white space on the left?
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alienwar42 In reply to MoonDoodles7 [2016-10-28 22:34:45 +0000 UTC]
This Drawing Β is on a smaller peice of paper. Β so when I scanned it . Β the paper didn't cover the entire space on the copying machine so your seeing the excess space on the scanner.Β
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Biogodz [2016-06-22 06:32:39 +0000 UTC]
Awww, Wolfy.
um...Sorry. Lol I love wolfies.
Their adorable.
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alienwar42 In reply to Biogodz [2016-06-23 16:28:11 +0000 UTC]
I love them as well
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alienwar42 In reply to hsoJ95 [2016-02-01 12:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
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Intellart [2016-01-14 20:08:51 +0000 UTC]
This is just so awesome!!!!
You always make really amazing art!!
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alienwar42 In reply to Intellart [2016-01-15 13:42:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I'm really happy to hear that you enjoy my work .Β
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