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Published: 2003-10-25 18:12:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 36
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Description The black and white squares loom ahead
the weak yet fearless pawns take one step closer to there goal.
Only to be trounched by the everlasting abilities of the queen.
The game roles on and a battle commences
Knights tangle spears,
Bishops collide in a diagonal assault,
and the two kings stay stationary... silent,
just waiting for their prescious queens to finish off their opponents.

suddenly the powerful rooks are unleashed!
they power sidewaysΒ Β 
destroying any left cowering pawns from their way.
the king looks worried, he has been checked by the rook!
The king cleverly backs away, and out of check.
But wait! its a trap suddenly the bishop checs the king,
where to go! the king accepts defeat and bows down.
Check mate!
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Comments: 10

Killerworm51 [2004-05-08 15:52:34 +0000 UTC]

nice work

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alik [2003-10-28 11:51:49 +0000 UTC]

im really happy with the feedback on this poem , i quite like it myself! thankyou very much for all your comments!

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phobiald [2003-10-28 00:22:42 +0000 UTC]

another great poem and again lots of detail

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sugabear [2003-10-27 22:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Good poem

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fk [2003-10-27 18:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very nice way you chose to describe a chess game. Like it! Nice!

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SoftlyBeatenSoul [2003-10-27 18:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I like the idea...well executed as well. A few typos, or spelling errors, but that's ok. Wonderful piece. I really admire it.

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rachae1 [2003-10-26 10:54:15 +0000 UTC]

gd poem about somit sooo boring!!!!! U cud of left sum exclamation marks out in the last verse tho...

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KittD [2003-10-26 10:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Neat...
you could write a book, that is very detailed movement.
and it makes you feel like you are on a chess board instead of watch it.

I never did trust the bishops

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pr0to [2003-10-26 09:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Hey awsome , this can be also be interperted as the game of life i think...
I say this 'cause as i was readin' it , it made me remind situations of my personal life , great work

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Rulother [2003-10-25 22:00:23 +0000 UTC]

nice

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