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Published: 2003-10-24 15:29:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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The girls walk out proudly,but just one stands out
her gallant dress glides seductively along the pine wood.
I stare half expecting rose petals to fall from the masterpiece
which is the ball dress.
Her skin a smooth peach,
so inticing yet still untouchable.
her eyes glow and my heart beats,
beauty has me in it's grasp,
I catch a glimpse of her locked hair,
which flows like a golden waterfall
she looks so pure, so inocent
She approaches me...
this is it i think to myself.
She stops a foot away from me,
opens her mouth and says in a shrill voice
'you got a light love? i ain't got one and im dying for a fag'
i think to myself; fucking hell! appearances can be fucking deceiving!
Comments: 14
Great build up and then boom in your face!!
True beauty isn't everything!
Nicely writen,
Greetz Chris
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Very amusing...an interesting twist at the end.
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that was effective lol
reminds me of those 70's movies or shows and theres that blonde and her poodle skirt. And she turns out to be a total snob...or maybe just a little rough.
Great build up and hit wall ending < --that makes sense
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nice work!
yes sometimes appearences are indeed deceaving
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yeah... Good word choices.
but still funny.
-Josh
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Hiya Ali!!!
thats really good!!
ur a poet and u didn't know it!!
Or maybe u did!
10/10 Ali!!
Please submit more!
Please take some time 2 look at my picture's and drawings!!
Thanx!!
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