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liz-blizz [2016-11-17 15:34:49 +0000 UTC]
She looks amazing! I had really forgot what prompt that you had for this round and thought that she looked a bit like Madame Leota from the Haunted Mansion. But she just looks really cute here! I love love this!
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allyvania88 In reply to liz-blizz [2016-11-17 16:50:53 +0000 UTC]
huh, ... never thought of that... cool
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msbrit90 [2016-10-18 02:09:11 +0000 UTC]
very pretty!
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-10-18 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ... I had to take breaks in writing which caused the delay in submitting .... but it was totally worth it
W: Whisper couldn't hear nor feel the chair going through her ... her eyes glowed white and she fell into a possessive trance
"SCROOOGGGGGEEEEE! WHERE ARE YOU SCROOGE!"
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Daughterofthehunt10 In reply to allyvania88 [2016-10-18 02:30:19 +0000 UTC]
T: *her black eyes get big, then she shrieks and covers her ears and eyes at the light* SHUT IT!! scrooge isn't here! *comes out of her shadow and glares at the ghosts face.....but her eyes widen* ....aren't you the one i ran into earlier? Oo oh come now, why can't I get a break ><
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-13 17:25:13 +0000 UTC]
A Flash of Pink wizzed passed Tzili straight to Whisper
Maria: "Whisper! Whisper, listen to me, .... Your not Marley, (Looks at the shadow girl behind her) help me out ... we need to make her remember who she is Marley is not Real Whisper, he's just a character of a story"
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Daughterofthehunt10 In reply to allyvania88 [2016-12-14 04:03:24 +0000 UTC]
T: *looking between scrooge and the new ghost* why would i want to do that? *screaches, and dives back into her shadow pocket. She comes out behind a chair, shrowded in shadows. She hates the light*
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-14 04:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Maria *rolls her eyes* ... "Because it will only get worse if we cant pull her out; Marley may have been a fictional character who warned Scrooge of what was to come ... but he still is a wandering spirit and very close to a poltergeist ... If this keeps up, your peace and quiet will be the least of your worries."
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Daughterofthehunt10 In reply to allyvania88 [2016-12-14 04:33:20 +0000 UTC]
T: So what, a ghost hiding in an abandon library, what's so bad about that? the only people who will get hurt are the stupid humans who wonder in here!
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-14 04:35:17 +0000 UTC]
M: "He's a WANDERING SPIRIT!!!!! Plus, do you know how many libraries have a copy of this book?"
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-14 04:46:36 +0000 UTC]
M: "YOUNG LADY!!!, You were there when this happened last time , ... Sure, it was mild mannered ... but this isn't one of those of times .... and she really needs another soul who understands what she went through ..."
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Daughterofthehunt10 In reply to allyvania88 [2016-12-14 04:56:51 +0000 UTC]
T: *Covers her ears, and scowls* how do you expect me to know what she went through? Humans hate me! They hate shadows, they hate darkness, and most of the time, i don't even have my free will serving a useless witch! I have no connection to a lonely ghost who doesn't know how to control her powers, or a dead greedy guy in a lot of chains!
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-14 05:55:51 +0000 UTC]
M: (turns around to look at Tzili) "There you go, do you realize how alone she is ... even around me, she cant control the things she does... even with the lessons I have given her.... and she still is piecing together her memories ... she still doesn't know her own NAME! She only can remember a couple things she liked when she was alive... reading, singing or performing ... and the night, how the cold moon would give her hope."
Whisper Possessed by Marley: "YOU, WANT DO YOU KNOW OF LONELINESS AND HEARTACHE ... WHAT DO YOU KNOW OF GUILT AND SHAME FOR YOUR PAST LIFE!"
M: (turns back around to Whisper) "Oh really Marley, Well you may not believe my tale, but I will tell it.... My life has been a struggle since I was born, I lived in an unproductive neighborhood... and we were so broke, I couldn't go to college and was forced to work as soon as I got out of high school ... the only bliss I had was my family, I married a good man and we both worked hard to provide for our two kids ... ... ... but you know what that meant for our family, multiple jobs ... and barley seeing the kids... a babysitter pretty much took care of them as soon as school let out ... and the one time (balls up her fists, red tears streaming down her face) THE ONE DAMN TIME! I decide to do something for myself ... well let me just say this, never hire a new babysitter to watch your kids on one of the most darkest nights ... After working one job and the lucky to have the another off, I was invited to a Halloween Fiesta ... and our normal watcher was sick with the flu ... so I asked one of my neighbors to watch my children ... I never went home before going to the party ... halfway through the night someone said I had a phone call from the babysitter .... one child somehow wandered to her house .. with no fence to block the pool they had ... and well, when a 5 year old boy walks around at night ... he looks for shiny things ... he saw the shiny pool cover and wanted run around ... he drowned within a matter of minutes ... why, because she was bathing my six year old, got a call from a friend and got distracted ... my little girl, .... my nina died in the bathtub ... I ran home ... the girl was sobbing ... freaking out because it was her fault and she blamed me for giving her hassle of kids ... trust me when I say she never got paid for her services .... and I was so distraught ... when my husband got home ... he snapped ... killing me in front of a mirror ... MY SOUL was stuck in that Mirror off and on again for 20 YEARS!"
(Bloods starts to pool around Maria's dress, as the dress fades to white, and Maria's eyes glow bright red even through the blood) "So don't tell me about shame or guilt Jacob Marley, because the shame you feel for being greedy is only a fraction of what shame I have .... and I have guilt as well, I lost myself for 15 of those years ... killing neglectful families whole, trying to find my children's spirits ... I have been killing people who didn't even deserve to die, because I was hungry for blood."
(Maria starts glow, transitioning from white to red to pink and back again) Because I am the Bloody Woman in White, and my power exceeds your tenfold. So I command you to release this poor lost child... who hasn't even been a spirit for more than a blink of an eye.... NOW!"
C/N - sorry about that... been keeping that part of her story underwraps for a year or so ... but yeah she is literally a mix between a Woman in White spirit and a Bloody Mary spirit .... was a possible ip for one of my challenges I altered for the first 10 group ... (ended not going with it because it wasn't full body pic) from a series called Rejected Princesses ... (the last part was a more recent discovery, the first two have been a confirmed thing I planned for her backstory since the beginning)
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Daughterofthehunt10 In reply to allyvania88 [2016-12-14 22:54:41 +0000 UTC]
T: *watches this, her expression bored. She growls, and shadows wash over the possessed ghost until nothing is visible of her but a black wall. The shadows go inside the ghost, and dive in, separating the possession from its host. When Marley leaves, he fizzles out of sight, leaving whisper alone there. Tzili hasn't even broken a sweat. She dissappears in her shadow, leaving the old library*
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allyvania88 In reply to Daughterofthehunt10 [2016-12-15 03:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Whisper: (out of unbreath) W-what just happened?
Maria: (Moves to help Whisper up) I'll explain when we get home ... though I think we might need a vacation
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