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Alpheux In reply to Malganis-Lefay [2017-06-19 05:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Thx for your opnion. Do you think the problem is the color and shadding or the whole design?

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Malganis-Lefay In reply to Alpheux [2017-06-19 17:34:34 +0000 UTC]

the color is one of my issues, the shading is ok
the dominant color in the designs of the other dragons represent there monstercard type
for example while having a dirty green skin the dominant of starve venom is violet like fusion cards
same for the others, white for syncro, black for Xyz, orange-red for effect
the dominant color of your dragon is gold instead of something like royal blue.

another thing is that there are to many different details and forms used that dont blend together to a real theme as a whole (mainly because not one of them is really dominant)
i see the exodia headpiece, a armored neck but a fleshy tail, edgy armor parts of various shape, round parts of various shape, thorns of various shapes, some gems, swords as wingbones, nuts at the tail end and braids... and some other stuff

and the more nitpicking stuff:
the eye part of its name is already taken by pendelum dragon and it looks like that your ritual dragon has the body shape of Clear wing/crystal wing dragon

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Alpheux In reply to Malganis-Lefay [2017-06-23 18:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Thx for your critics, the next one will be better.

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