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alrun-art In reply to ArlenFram [2018-01-04 16:40:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! EmiliaStt , have you heard? You look like a fairy
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Karma-Phobia [2017-11-11 14:37:31 +0000 UTC]
Hewwo my fellow deviant , I was brought here from and I'm here to attempt to make a constructive critique .
I absolutely adore this portrait . Realism is to real so I always try to not draw it as much as possible haha . In this piece you have captured the beauty of the art of Realism including , not over shading , choosing the correct color pallet and putting actual life into this piece . One of my only issues with this piece is the hat . Now my issue with the hat is that all the fluff fuzzy , ahhhh whats the word . Wait - fur is like held back and it really doesn't pop out much in the front , which I know is hard to capture in realism but still . The anatomy was pretty much on point , and I love the detail on the hair .
And I have one question to ask you ! HOw do you even draw lips , they look so amazing !!!! I probably struggle with doing that ( drawing lips ) because my style is really cartoony and I try to avoid realism as much as possible .
I hope you take my critique well . Have a nice day
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Jezza5655 [2017-11-11 02:34:06 +0000 UTC]
Hey! I'm from ProjectComment.
First of all, I LOVE this piece. It looks absolutely fantastic. The colors are understated and pleasing and the anatomy is very realistic.
One thing I think could be changed is that you could add some darker lines in her hair and define her clothes and the background more, because they're very blurry and don't stand out very much. As well, on the left side of her face there's a strange bump below her cheekbone and I'm not sure why it's there. Also, another thing I think could be a little better is the shading on her face, because there are a lot of white highlights. For the shading, I'd suggest using a darker and warmer tone for the darker parts and a lighter and cooler tone for the highlights (although it also depends on the lighting, but since I can't see a reason for the white highlights, I think for this piece the shading should be changed a bit.)
But I overall, this piece is absolutely fantastic– it has wonderful anatomy and colors as well as detail. Overall, amazing job, and I can't wait to see more of your art in the future!
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alrun-art In reply to Jezza5655 [2017-11-11 18:26:16 +0000 UTC]
it does, thank you so much!
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alrun-art In reply to EmiliaStt [2017-11-10 21:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, it means a lot! I'm so happy that you enjoy the series and your personal portrait!
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ysasi [2017-11-10 17:00:44 +0000 UTC]
Man, I'm so proud to see you grow with all of these portraits. The lighting and detail just keeps getting better and better, and I can see where you try new things with hair and fur as well as foreground and background elements. She looks fantastic!
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