faerie-elfmaiden [2011-04-25 05:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Awwwe That's so cute
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AmiHeartsYou In reply to faerie-elfmaiden [2011-04-26 16:16:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Shine-Chan! Also thank you for ing!
faerie-elfmaiden In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-05-12 15:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Anytime, Ami-chan!
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alms4purgie [2011-04-25 04:36:45 +0000 UTC]
This is a nice story line. It's short and shows the progression of learning how to love. I like how it's episodic, but the structure can make it slightly confusing. Perhaps if you go back through and separate the episodes with an extra line of empty space, the time flow would be easier to understand. Good work, though
AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-26 16:15:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Alright, I'll keep that in mind next I write. Thanks for reading!
alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-26 16:22:42 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, and I still love your icon!
AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-26 18:25:10 +0000 UTC]
Ikr? Chrona still rocks.
alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-26 18:38:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes, Chrona does rock; however, I am unaware of what "ikr" stands for.
AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-28 11:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Ikr stands for: "I know right." xD
alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-28 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]
I fail at internet acronyms!
AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-29 12:47:44 +0000 UTC]
I just figure them out on my own. xD
alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-29 16:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, now I feel old There are some I figure out but with some I just go, "Huh?"
AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-29 17:28:14 +0000 UTC]
That happens to me too. xD
ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:37:30 +0000 UTC]
I really like the story, but I do think that there could be a bit more detail in the adjective department. Good job, though!
ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:37:11 +0000 UTC]
AmiHeartsYou In reply to ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:57:19 +0000 UTC]
Alright! I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!