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Published: 2011-04-24 15:42:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description "Hey , Hiyori...?"

"Yeah?"

"I-I have a c-confession to make."

"Did you eat out of the cookie jar again?! I noticed some of them where missing!"

"N-no. T-t-that's not it."

"What then?"

"I... l-l-love you, Hiyori. Very , very much."

"EH?!?!"

I gasped and gaped at you in shock. WHAT THE HECK?! We were best friends since we were young! This doesn't feel right. I was hit by the most worst emotional whirlwind ever.

"B-but! Listen Kohori ... we're childhood buds , isn't this a bit ... strange? This is too sudden!! I mean , I never thought of you in that way ...!"

"I know. But I have a request to make , consider it... for old times sake?"

"Okay , fine. What is it?"

"Give US a try."

Jeez , you fool. How much are you gonna put me through? I ... I knew I never was good in the 'love' department. I was oblivious , to anything like that. But seriously , no woman would've ever expected this! I should refuse , before things get out of hand. But , your eyes , your beautiful sapphire eyes , they're pleading ... that was the first time , I had ever felt this kind of pain. The pain of ... 'love'.

"Alright , I'll go out with you."

Idiot. Thats what I am , an idiot. Not an idiot for accepting you , an idiot for never feeling for you in that way. The feeling of 'love'.

"Hiyori! Look what I got you ... its a plushie! I love you Hiyori!"

There's that pain again , your bright face lit up my day , it always would. I loved seeing you smile , you always complained that you weren't handsome , or manly. But for me , I could stare at such a beautiful face forever. I looked at you with 'love'.

"Hey Kohori , I made these for you. H-happy Valentines."

"Whoa! Chocolates? Thanks Hiyori. Mmmph- they taste awshum!"

"D-don't talk with your mouth full! You idiot ..."

Praise , it made my stomach feel like someone was tying knots in there. Bright red was the color my face always wore when you praised me. I would never say it out loud because of my stubborn personality ... but your praise make me feel wanted. I 'love' it when you praise me.

"Hey Hiyori?"

"Yeah?"

"I want to tell you something."

"You ate out of the cookie jar! I just know it!!"

"Nope. That's not it."

"What then?"

"I love you."

...

"I 'love' you too."
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Comments: 16

faerie-elfmaiden [2011-04-25 05:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Awwwe

That's so cute

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to faerie-elfmaiden [2011-04-26 16:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Shine-Chan! Also thank you for ing!

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faerie-elfmaiden In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-05-12 15:23:03 +0000 UTC]

Anytime, Ami-chan!

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alms4purgie [2011-04-25 04:36:45 +0000 UTC]

This is a nice story line. It's short and shows the progression of learning how to love. I like how it's episodic, but the structure can make it slightly confusing. Perhaps if you go back through and separate the episodes with an extra line of empty space, the time flow would be easier to understand. Good work, though

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-26 16:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Alright, I'll keep that in mind next I write. Thanks for reading!

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alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-26 16:22:42 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, and I still love your icon!

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-26 18:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Ikr? Chrona still rocks.

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alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-26 18:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Chrona does rock; however, I am unaware of what "ikr" stands for.

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-28 11:38:50 +0000 UTC]

Ikr stands for: "I know right." xD

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alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-28 18:47:11 +0000 UTC]

I fail at internet acronyms!

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-29 12:47:44 +0000 UTC]

I just figure them out on my own. xD

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alms4purgie In reply to AmiHeartsYou [2011-04-29 16:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Well, now I feel old There are some I figure out but with some I just go, "Huh?"

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to alms4purgie [2011-04-29 17:28:14 +0000 UTC]

That happens to me too. xD

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ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:37:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like the story, but I do think that there could be a bit more detail in the adjective department. Good job, though!

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ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:37:11 +0000 UTC]

I really like the story, but I do think that there could be a bit more detail in the adjective department. Good job, though!

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AmiHeartsYou In reply to ElephantsElephants [2011-04-24 16:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Alright! I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!

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