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Description Down in the valley, Makas sees a round shape gliding over the snow. He bounds down the slope clumsily in his electrically heated pressure suit, creating small avalanches that descend around him in seeming slow motion. The run becomes an apprehensive walk as he begins to appreciate the size of the striding thing, and the walk slows to a crawl until he comes to a stop about a hundred yards in front of it. The being's softly crunching footsteps get louder with every second as it approaches, and Makas begins to sweat, then tremble. The creature is looming in front of him now, its legs swinging, its coat rippling with every step. Suddenly, it's upon him. For a brief moment as it strides overhead he looks up to see frost falling from its giant body; then it’s over and the creature's thudding footfalls are receding. Makas turns to watch it go. When he can no longer make out its movement against the smoking mountains in the distance, he begins the long hike back to his experimental station.



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The planet Amund just barely skirts its planet's habitable zone, which, in addition to the reverse greenhouse effect created by its volcanos, makes it one of the coldest life-bearing worlds; temperatures here get as low as -200 degrees celsius.

One of the mere few hundred creatures that can survive here is Dóard’s Snowball, depicted here striding through carbon dioxide snow as a human researcher observes. The graphic on the right is a cross section of the animal’s body.

The Snowball is an almost absurdly well-insulated organism: Its outside layer is composed of a coat of hair almost a meter thick, which is divided into a protective outer layer and a denser insulating layer beneath. Deeper in lies the creature's shell, with is full of evacuated spaces that insulate it like a vacuum flask; the walls of the spaces are coated in guanine crystals to prevent air from leaking in. Next comes a layer of fat for extra insulation and cushioning, and, finally, the alien's relatively tiny body.

The Snowball's legs protrude through a small gap in the shell, and only a little way beyond the body are composed entirely of dead tissue. They're manipulated by tendons leading to tightly-packed muscles close to the body. Every once in a while, a new pair that has been growing inside the shell uncurls to take their place and the old legs are shed.

Counterintuitively, Dóard's Snowball is an ectotherm. This is presumably to save energy, for its environment contains abundant sources of natural heat in the form of volcanic fumaroles. These oases are the stopping-over points on the animal's never-ending journey; the Snowballs rests only a few days at each site to graze on the microbial mats that flourish in the relative warmth. Before leaving, the animal will squat down over a vent and force open the slit-shaped opening in its shell to expose its body to the hot gases. This heat will keep it going for a week, after which time it will be forced to burn its fat reserves to keep warm.

The hair of these aliens is one of the few commodities valuable and light enough to be worth transporting through space; many of the research stations on Amund support themselves by trading Snowball fur taken from corpses. The fur is then taken to nearby Einstein (in the same system) to be made into clothing for grotesquely wealthy individuals. There’s some concern that this trade will eventually give rise to poaching, which would be devastating to these extremely slow-breeding animals.

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Addendum: There is one facet of Amund's biosphere that the scientists have yet to fully explore. A rising plume of clouds on the equator marks the location of a volcanic caldera 200 miles across, a place where the climate is relatively mild. This region is a reservoir of clades that went extinct elsewhere on Amund; indeed, it contains 90 percent of the planet's biological diversity. Intriguingly, among these holdouts is a species as anatomically primitive as it is neurologically advanced; the Antyuwot is Amund's surprise sophont, an intelligent race living in some of the harshest conditions imaginable for carbon-based life. Almost nothing is known about their society as of yet, but their appearance alone provides a picture of what life on Amund probably looked like millions of years before the current cold spell. Here is an illustration: [link]


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Sorry for the less than stellar writing. It’s two in the morning right now .

You can hover your cursor over the diagram to see what the different layers are.

Thanks to for providing the sophont illustration and the idea for the caldera!

Comments and criticism welcome.

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Comments: 42

Hawkbeetlette [2021-12-31 03:58:14 +0000 UTC]

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Hardvaro [2013-09-19 23:39:17 +0000 UTC]

What do they eat?

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AmnioticOef In reply to Hardvaro [2013-11-12 03:32:53 +0000 UTC]

They eat the fauna that grows around volcanic vents.

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Hardvaro In reply to AmnioticOef [2013-11-15 22:52:36 +0000 UTC]

...How?

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beingsneaky In reply to Hardvaro [2018-06-08 23:44:35 +0000 UTC]

not the creator of this thing but i guess it eats with a proboscis

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JWArtwork [2012-03-18 11:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool design! I'ts very creative!

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AmnioticOef In reply to JWArtwork [2012-03-21 03:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you .

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JWArtwork In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-03-21 15:42:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem, my friend!

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MaxterandKiwiKing [2012-02-24 15:09:06 +0000 UTC]

An ectotherm in a frozen waste?Impossible.

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AmnioticOef In reply to MaxterandKiwiKing [2012-02-24 16:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. It would help if someone did the math, but unfortunately that someone isn't me .

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beingsneaky In reply to AmnioticOef [2018-06-08 23:45:20 +0000 UTC]

how about you change it to a messotherm

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OblivionJunkey94 [2012-02-23 17:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting how does it see?

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AmnioticOef In reply to OblivionJunkey94 [2012-02-23 22:16:30 +0000 UTC]

There are specialized hairs leading to its eyes that act like fiber optics.

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OblivionJunkey94 In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-23 22:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay it a very cool design pardon the pun

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AmnioticOef In reply to OblivionJunkey94 [2012-02-24 05:23:04 +0000 UTC]

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OblivionJunkey94 In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-24 17:02:45 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Tektalox [2012-02-16 07:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Cute, simple and super-alien! I like how it can shed of and grow new legs and that it uses fiber optic-hair in order to see through its fur. Good job!

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AmnioticOef In reply to Tektalox [2012-02-16 22:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Leggurm [2012-02-13 09:33:59 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! I can imaging this living on the planet Hoth in Star Wars.

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AmnioticOef In reply to Leggurm [2012-02-13 15:30:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks .

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Leggurm In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-14 04:45:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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bensen-daniel [2012-02-12 17:40:17 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea that the legs are really puppet-controlled. What happens when one is suddenly damaged?

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AmnioticOef In reply to bensen-daniel [2012-02-13 03:19:54 +0000 UTC]

Alternatively, it could quickly grow a stunted pair of "emergency legs".

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indigomagpie In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-17 23:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Well, since it can clearly survive for a while without food, it could probably survive lying still until it grew new legs (particularly if they were stunted.)

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AmnioticOef In reply to indigomagpie [2012-02-18 00:36:43 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. Then again, heat loss is a problem.

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AmnioticOef In reply to bensen-daniel [2012-02-13 02:30:55 +0000 UTC]

I suppose the animal just limps along until it can grow a new pair, or dies. But then, it has no predators, and snow's a forgiving surface to fall on.

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bensen-daniel In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-13 06:54:05 +0000 UTC]

I bet that direct contact with the snow is bad for it though. Maybe it can extend the legs it has growing and use them.
Or perhaps, rather than bird-like jointed legs with toes, it has lots of stilt-like rods (like a sea urchin), which are constantly growing, breaking off, and being replaced.

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AmnioticOef In reply to bensen-daniel [2012-02-13 07:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it may be forced to extend an immature set of legs.

I don't know about sea-urchin spines. It seems to me that proper legs are necessary in order to walk efficiently, and producing lots of spines that then break off is a waste of biomass.

Maybe it's a system that could work for one of the creatures living in the volcanic caldera environment I was discussing with Yaspb; I can imagine the spines being derived from stiffened hairs.

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bensen-daniel In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-13 18:52:26 +0000 UTC]

As long as I get my snow-urchins, I'm happy

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AmnioticOef In reply to bensen-daniel [2012-02-13 20:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Boom, they now exist in my fictional universe .

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Onironus [2012-02-11 22:06:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Fantastic! What kind of senses does it have? Awesome concept with the shedding of the legs; never heard of that before. As well, the extra worldbuilding and exoenvironmental twist really complete the Snowball's image.

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AmnioticOef In reply to Onironus [2012-02-12 01:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Onironus! There are specialized hairs that act like fiber optics to guide light to its eyes, and it has a keen magnetic sense for navigation.

I'm thinking the lower legs are composed of flexible tissue that freezes solid on contact with the outside air.

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Onironus In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-12 07:43:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, alien right down to the last bit!

I like the idea of solidification by freezing, kind of an environmentally mediated ossification. The tendons controlling the joints, are they running all the way down to the toes? And if they are, how do they keep from freezing solid?

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AmnioticOef In reply to Onironus [2012-02-13 03:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Good question. I suppose there could be an oily layer inside the leg to lubricate the tendons and keep them from becoming encased in ice. The tendons themselves would have to be made of an exotic substance that stays pliable at extremely low temperatures; whether something like that exists, I don't know.

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Onironus In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-14 21:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, icefish have antifreeze in their bodies, which allows them to swim in subzero temperatures, though I'm not sure of the limits this has. Biology always seems to find a way around things in terms of possible and impossible though when it comes to chemistry. I think it's safe to assume that such a material or substance could exist.

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AmnioticOef In reply to Onironus [2012-02-15 01:39:25 +0000 UTC]

That's what I figured .

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lizerdspherex [2012-02-11 16:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I just want to know how it eats and what?

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AmnioticOef In reply to lizerdspherex [2012-02-12 01:13:55 +0000 UTC]

It's buried in there: "the Snowballs rests only a few days at each site to graze on the microbial mats that flourish in the relative warmth." What you can't see in the cross section is the maggot-like extrusible mouth .

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yasbp [2012-02-11 12:11:37 +0000 UTC]

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AmnioticOef In reply to yasbp [2012-02-12 00:05:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Mike, I appreciate your enthusiasm .

Yeah, it actually does look like one of those 50's sci-fi magazine covers. I suppose the man is wearing an atomic mylar space suit .

The other animals on the planet are all pretty blobby in order to reduce surface area; you'd need to cut them open to see most of the variation. There is a group of lemming-like puffballs that inhabit the cave systems melted by volcanic gases, and a rich chemosynthetic and photosynthetic microbiota (the two strategies are more or less equally matched in these conditions).

Perhaps there are organisms which live so slowly that scientists haven't detected them yet.

As for respiration, yes, they simply breath oxygen and exhale CO2. I didn't even think about it, but that's actually a perfect explanation for the frost dripping off the snowball's body in the little vignette. I suppose their integument sheds condensation easily, like wolverine fur. They must also have a labyrinthine system of passages to warm air before it's drawn into the body.

One thing I haven't really thought about yet is how they reproduce. Any ideas?

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yasbp In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-12 01:20:33 +0000 UTC]

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AmnioticOef In reply to yasbp [2012-02-13 03:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, those are some great ideas!

I like the concept of a larval form that resembles the primitive ancestor. In fact, I think the lemming-like creatures I mentioned before are actually Snowball larvae. Maybe in the early stages of their lives they form packs that roam the underground caverns, a bit like baby sauropods.

The hotspots will cover the full range of possible sizes, with small being the commonest and large being the rarest. For this reason, large hotspots may be important breeding colonies for these animals.

The closest thing there are to plants are lichen-like microbial colonies, except perhaps for some moss-like holdouts in the volcanic crater .

I like the idea of sophonts inhabiting a giant caldera. Maybe the crater is a kind of "lost world" of fauna surviving from a period when the planet was warmer, the sophonts included. I can imagine the society being incredibly conservative and strictly regimented, especially after they degrade their already-fragile environment (a bit like Iceland). They may establish some poor colonies in other large hotspots, which could support societies ranging from those of the Greenland Norse to the Henderson islanders (have you read Collapse)?

I wonder what the relationship between the caldera and the human research stations would be. Perhaps the humans know about the hot spot, but haven't had the time/money to explore it. Or maybe they don't know about it; they only know about "the anomaly", a small spot that's constantly covered in clouds which they assume to be the site of a super volcano.

"I'm not sure whether to be super excited by this awesome ecosystem, or utterly disappointed at the fact that us internet folk can produce things so infinitely better than that of big budget movies (or furthermore, saddened by the fact that I didn't come up with it)."

Aw, I'm flattered . I liked the "hive mind" metaphor you used on Spec Evo.

As for what the sophonts' appearance, I like your idea. They should have a shell or bony plate homologous to the vacuum layer on their backs, though.

Alternatively, they could be completely unlike anything else on the planet; the only members of their clade to have survived the ice-age due to their intelligence.

I think sheddable legs are a novel adaptation to the cold. Then again, they may have evolved from a system in which segments of the body take over for one another in succession: new segments appearing at the head end could slowly move backwards, first losing their sensory organs and modifying mouthparts into legs as they became body segments, then developing reproductive organs and finally an anus as they became tail segments.

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yasbp In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-14 01:31:05 +0000 UTC]

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AmnioticOef In reply to yasbp [2012-02-15 01:38:40 +0000 UTC]

I love that story, especially the core concept of a man and an alien both set adrift...There are already characters and potential plots going through my mind.

I also love the idea of land boats . Just to clarify, you mean these, right? [link] They could be the main transport vehicles of the researchers.

Yeah, it occurred to me as well that that might not be the best growth scheme for sapience. I think your concept works better.

I've been thinking about the aliens and their culture; I imagine them as ancestrally being plains grazers/omnivores that evolved sapience as a result of their extremely complex social interactions (I'm thinking they may have a baroque breeding system similar to the one you thought up). Because of their featureless environment and lack of manipulators, they never developed the impulse to create tools. They did however domesticate a species of land-urchin (Bensen-daniel's idea) which they raised for food; overgrazing by their herds of urchins then caused the fragile environment to undergo an ecological collapse, resulting in widespread starvation and chaos (perhaps another way in which they modified the environment was by digging tunnels to bring volcanic gases to inhospitable regions).

The society that rose from the ashes of the calamity was extremely conservative. The aliens gave up herding and adopted a philosophy of "animal-becoming", trying to live as much as possible like animals. A powerful organization remained that enforced the new lifestyle through a network of agents placed in every roaming band (effectively thought police).

"I'd hate to feel I'm intruding on your project or prompting you to take on an unnecessary workload. "

You're not imposing at all! I probably would have abandoned this world by now if it weren't for your ideas.

"Somebody will ask me to do something, and I'll be like 'sorry, I have some work I need to be doing', and they'll be like 'what' and I'll be like 'I kind of need to design stuff for an alien planet" and they'll be like 'u srs? That doesn't sound like work' "

XD

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yasbp In reply to AmnioticOef [2012-02-18 16:57:25 +0000 UTC]

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AmnioticOef In reply to yasbp [2012-02-21 22:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Good ideas about the land boats (your rambling cracks me up ).

Oh, excellent point about the inward traveling winds. I suppose that would tend to make the interior of the caldera intensely dry, as wind deposited its loads of snow as it rushed up the rim, then raced down the opposite slope sucking moisture from the ground. Is water vapor a volcanic gas, by any chance?

Well, if the organizations that run the research stations are anything like NASA is nowadays, I could see exploration being deferred indefinitely .

Constantly replacing reproductive organs might increase the likelihood of mutation in the aliens' offspring, so I'd go with having the reproductive organs at the front. I'd be interested to see your pictures!

Sorry for the short reply, I'm just extremely busy at the moment . Things should return to normal by the end of the week.

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