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kaitheking95 [2018-01-24 03:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I found your art in the projectcomment group.  I am commenting for the give one comment of two hundred plus words to get my art submitted into their gallery and to get one comment in return. I do hope I am doing this right. I am not exactly great at giving constructive comments, but I will try. I really like how this character looks. The lines are really smooth. I like the little smirk too. Seems like beanpole may have a bit of an attitude. I also like their stance as well. The design on the knapsack is really cool looking as well as very detailed. I also like the way you drew their face as well. If I am being honest, I do not see any flaw in this, but that's just me. I also really like the plaid design on the pants! Your art, to me, is goals. I also like how it looks like watercolor art too. I like the way the colors blend with one another as well. Overall this looks really good. Hopefully, I get to see more of Beanpole in the near future because I really like this character. Good Job!

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PaulaEdith [2018-01-23 14:36:02 +0000 UTC]

Hi from project comment! 

Your character looks amazing! Her backpack is really cool.
The face is very expressive too. Hair looks better in the close up (more fluffy and natural), the fullbody ones has less refinement. 
The clothes are very personal and the pose looks nice, just one detail: I'm not sure if it's possible to incline the shoulder and hips like that having the feet at the same level. I remmember a tip of my teacher saying the inclination of shoulders and hips should be oppossite one to another.
The arms need more work, specially the hands, it looks very sketchy and the form is undefined. It's hard to draw hands well but it gives a lot of points to the final result.
The color is great, you have a cute style, like traditionalish-digital xD 
It would be a plus to add a simple background, or a bit of shadow and the name of your character.
Well, that's all!

Keep doing art! ^.^

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carbonee [2018-01-23 02:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful design and beautiful colors. I can see her personality shining trough her outfit and expression

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theJfluffy [2018-01-22 21:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Very nice character!

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