Comments: 19
becursed [2011-06-29 02:30:10 +0000 UTC]
Sweet.
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Drwhitey [2010-07-05 02:44:57 +0000 UTC]
yay good happy poem
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Drwhitey In reply to amy-jae [2010-07-05 03:44:31 +0000 UTC]
same here
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Cibbwin [2010-07-02 09:04:56 +0000 UTC]
This is very sweet and relatable. A few of your rhymes seem forced, but overall you did a nice job.
The fourth stanza especially is lovely. I get such a strong image from that one!
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amy-jae In reply to freezeframe666 [2010-07-03 02:03:04 +0000 UTC]
Omg how rude of me! I am sorry, happy belated Canada Day.
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PaintTheSkyRed [2010-07-01 16:26:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice. It makes me even more excited for summer.
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williamfdevault [2010-07-01 15:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Nice collage of snapshots of summer.
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