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Published: 2010-02-24 18:50:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1336; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 42
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Hi,this is my latest work and my 1st interior picture.
Interior is build from my imagination, what I would like to have in my house
Made in 3d max 2010 and rendered with Mental Ray.
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Ah, sad kužim da su 'točkice' iz prvog komentara vjerojatno samo šum (što mi je čudno vidjet kad se ne radi o fotografiji? ... jpeg?)
Jedna stvar koja mi tu ne paše je čisto pozicija kamere - poklapaju se dvije bitne linije kod stepenica (vrh ograde i spoj zida i stepenica), što oku daje čudan dojam.
Ali, sviđa mi se ideja ovakvog stana
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wow looks real 
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Everything's great, its just the noise that bothers me :S
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Hai I saw that its your first work in interiors things are working up well and good that you did it from your imagination!...but i think correcting certain small things will add more to it like...the left side curtain give more space between the curtain and top ceiling will create more depth there, also give a more good material fro the curtain for the staircase side glass give slots..i mean mostly it wont be a single peace of glass so it would be panels of glass fixed on to some support to form the side rail, also improve the glass material mental ray has i think nice materials for glass...and most importantly try reducing the noise, all this i hope will greatly improve your scene here sure...if you feel happy after making those corrections i will be more happy... well done its a very good start do more!
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I would give crits but you have enough there to work with.
I however do really like the image! Noisy but really nice!
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I'm rendering the same one but bigger resolution , i think it will be better
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Well... several things I could say about this architecturally that aren't gonna work, but thats not the point of the render I believe. I'll talk about the shot itself.
The position of the camera is kind of awkward - the glass railing clashes with the stair treads, and with the reflections/translucency becomes confusing. Try shifting your position in the room so that their is more of a clear offset/overlap/distinction between the treads and railing.
How the beams react with the left wall is also confusing. Not sure whats going on there.
The image of Avatar feels slightly stretched across the tv. Try finding one that fits the aspect ratio. Also, all the seating is arranged pointing toward the tv, thats typically a 'no-no' for a living room.
Try adding some pictures/mural on the right wall - its a big blank canvas... maybe something that draws your eye upward. Also maybe a rug on the floor behind the couch.
Finally, the overall image needs to sit in the renderer a little longer, its a bit noisy. But aside from all that though, its a good first try at an interior perspective and the setting is nice coming straight from your imagination.
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Ty very much for your comments! It really help when i get comments like yours and critics !
I'll try to change things in this room
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youv got your scene looking great! one small advice though would be to put a tiny bit of variety into the swing of those blinds. even as a show room, there just a little bit too straight. you should try experimenting with them being a little bit more natural. I think it could make the scene look allot more realistic. Nice work tho man!
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Thnx fo' advice!
I'll have that on my mind!
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