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Anasatcia — Fly My Spirits WIP
Published: 2009-04-17 07:45:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 7
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This is my fav drawing I've done in a while. I love every little part of it! Will become a lineart as soon as I'm done cleaning it up.As for Critiques, please be a little nice but also tell it to me straight if there is anything that I could have done different or should have fixed on.
Kala & Kalaru (c) to me
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I can't wait to see this coloured. The lines are all very smooth and flowing, and the expression on the main face is very good.
The pose on the smaller figure is very dynamc, and the hands are extremely good. However, the face of this smaller figure is too pointy on the chin, and looks too wide. You might want to make it more of a curve.
Also be careful of the hair and make sure you know which strands are on top of or beneath certain aspects - this is shown on the wings.
I like the details in this and they are very smooth.
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Thank you so much for the feedback. Actually the wings are just as I wanted. They are see through and will makes more sense when I finish coloring it.
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you're welcome! Oh... yes! of course! I hadn't realised they were see through! XD can't wait to see it coloured
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Yeah, I don't like doing solid fairy wings.
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fair enough! XD thanks for explaining
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I can't officially critic cause I don't have a subscription, nut I will say this:
Your lineart is always wonderfull, it is so clean!
The only thing I want to point out is the bangs position. I thing that if they flowed out to the left instead of straight upright, it would look more natural.
>_<" I hope I wasn't unrespectfull.
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The only reason why I didn't do that was because they have way too much gel. They don't move period. lol
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ok 
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this looks very good.. I'll try a critique,but I can't see that much wrong with it!
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Very good job so far! Maybe you could fix up the fairy's left leg... it kind of looks flat near where her pelvis is.
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Okay, thanks for letting me know.
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ohh like it, very spring-ish 
It's Easter here, so all my cousins r here and being annoying and all...plus I have that chibi collage thing to work on... so, I guess I'll be able to do the collab at the end of the weekend, is that ok?
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Okay, take as much time as you need. I'm not in a hurry.
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