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andrewk — Norm and Cory Chapter 9 17
Published: 2007-03-15 02:39:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1201; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 13
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I am noticing that there are fewer clever jokes and more straight talking in this chapter. It's a CARTOON! About ANIMALS, for cryin out loud! But maybe you guys see it differently.Read ALL of Norm and Cory here [link] !
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I agree, the expressions are always great. and the drawing is smooth and crisp. good job
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*looks at last frame*
Oh, his shoes are totally untied
Now what's this about there not being enough jokes?
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i will admit, your pages bounce between having zero dialogue or material, straight into a page filled with almost all text.
but it's the moods and situations that you create between pages that makes it work, honestly. there's almost always a new setting, mood, or plot being revealed page after page.
and i'm cool with that, and you should be too.
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I like it! The clean coloring and shading are the best aspects of it. Straight talking is fine, too. There was a ton of talking in the strip where the bear (Darn I forgot his name) is talking with Norm about the book, so it's fine. Good Work.
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About that page, it was one of my most criticised pages for using too much dialogue.
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Oh... really? Well... I still liked it
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