SentimentallyScared [2007-03-28 02:33:09 +0000 UTC]
I personally think you sould have left the letter on the table top, floor, crumpled to the side, with her looking over at it; something to tie it in to the previous scene/ photo, something to make it a little more feeling. It just feels slightly lacking to me, but perhaps it is just me.
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