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Published: 2006-03-28 09:35:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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when things are so lonely upon this roadi wonder
will i make it out of the cold
so dark and delirious
i walk in hope that one day
i may be rescued from the fog
a glimmer, a light, a spark of hope
falls upon my path
so corny but true i look right up
and there you are
your looking straight at me with arms out wide open
even though i feel so lost
And I still need you and i still want you
i need you i want you
more and more
and i still need you and i still love you
i need you i want you
more and more.
Holding me tight I feel so right
resting in your embrace
My world once shattered is coming together
slowly like a jigsaw
People may question
but i dont listen
to all of those stupid lies
i've learnt something new and believe it is true
never forget who are you
And I still need you and i still want you
i need you i want you
more and more
and i still need you and i still love you
i need you i want you
more and more.
Why do I
need you more and more each day
why do i
tell me why
and i still need you and i still want you
i need you i want you
more and more
and still need you and i still love you
i need you i want you
more and more
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Comments: 6
Nice, I like it a lot, my long poems always end up going off on tangents... they never keep true meanings, but I love this.. very nice
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^_^ thankyou so much!!! lol... yeah long poems are kinda hard to right!!!
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wow i like a lot ^_^
i like how you've structured it - (I'm actually trying to improve my structure and my wording)..
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thankyou so much!
well i was walking form the bus stop and i had to put words to the annoying tune in my head and i was just singing randomly and i had a few weird stares at the girl singing down the street... and this is like the rough final copy.
i would offer u help with structure and wording but i dont know much about it. i just write what i feel like and how it comes out of my head (sounds weird) is usually how it stays!!!
thanks and good luck!!!
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Anytime ^_^
Ahh.
Ah, no problems ^^ I understand that.
Thanks!!
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