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Angeloffaithemp — Touched by an Angel
Published: 2005-05-30 17:49:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description An angel's love
an angel's light
an angel's wings
surround me tonight.

An angel that I know
an angel that I see
an angel that I love
a love setting me free.

This angel of whom I speak
her faith lets me fly
on wings of hope
I float towards the sky.

and with those wings
we'll carry dreams above
above the soaring clouds
above the peaceful dove.

Though flying so high
hope becomes cold
but I feel her touch my hand
and warmth of love takes hold.

As I hold her hand
hold it tightly in mine
I know we'll make it
we shall both be fine.

Because forever i'll protect her
this angel I now call mine
from all of lifes endeavors
forever down the line.

Scars and bruises
they don't mean much
because i'll just be healed
by her angelic touch.
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Comments: 6

Tiki-Rongo [2005-06-27 08:00:05 +0000 UTC]

I...HATE...YOU WHY CANT I WRITE LIKE THAT anywho just kidding i like it its really really good

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Tinsel-Wig [2005-06-11 07:50:11 +0000 UTC]

That's so cute. I love the subtle hints of repetition in there. Excellent.

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gloomy-optimist [2005-05-31 16:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Cool poem! I like it. It's way better than most of mine. Great job!!

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Neko-dragon [2005-05-30 22:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Matt!

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unseen-soul [2005-05-30 17:53:51 +0000 UTC]

thats a pretty neat poem , i thinks its really good, the imagery was great, im going to fav it, do u think u could stop by my page and look at my gallery, leave me some comments on how to write better, epecially rhymes. I think i could learn something from u

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Angeloffaithemp In reply to unseen-soul [2005-05-30 19:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks. I appreciate the compliment, i'll be sure to look through your gallery.

I would add the thing into my signature but i don't have the room to do so. sorry.

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