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These scars that I have hiddenJust below the surface of what anyone can see
Keep me awake with a mind numbing pain
to
let me never forget, what I used to be.
Battles I have lost, the wars I have maintained
Are wearing me down to the point of non-restraint
Oh, God, are you there...when I dont let myself feel you
It is too late to ask for your mercy...or maybe its too soon.
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2017 this is still how I feel. your poetry is helpful. ramsie shick. "thredd" hoping this note finds you in a very safe place...
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It feels a bit unfinished in the first stanza's. I do like the last two lines like the person above commented. Wonderful 
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I wrote it a while back, I need to go back and make sure the meter is right...I agree something not quite right in the begining.
You so should submit something...Im sure it would be wonderful.
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thankyou ever so much *smiles*
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