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Published: 2003-10-05 03:53:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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Description Hate is what we want, hate is what we need
Hate is all u create in me
with your endless lies, with your endless pain
you crawl in my heart, u toss it, u spit in it
one feeling at a time, a whole expression at the second
so much i feel towards you ... so painfull to be me
i want to beat you, to beat you down
cut you and see you bleed ... no one care .. at least not me
stand up in your body ... it feels like ive won
u lay down in my mind in the bottom of hell
I Hate you ... i wish you were death
it didint become reallity ... you still here
if you wont die ... then .. ill be dead.
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Comments: 6

gelly [2003-10-31 06:28:58 +0000 UTC]

I like your poem. It's nice. I think it explains a lot, if -inferred- the right way. Good job.

-Gelly.

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angelusofdeath In reply to gelly [2003-11-02 03:42:06 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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BloodyAngelus [2003-10-07 13:57:26 +0000 UTC]

strong piece, nice work.

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angelusofdeath In reply to BloodyAngelus [2003-10-07 17:51:55 +0000 UTC]

wiiiiiii thank u

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BloodyAngelus In reply to angelusofdeath [2003-10-07 18:37:58 +0000 UTC]

ur wellcome, keep it up,dude

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aphanter [2003-10-05 15:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Yup... Just like you said... it has a lot of feeling into it.
Very good

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