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khirt21 [2022-11-27 22:15:34 +0000 UTC]
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Pooptato1341 In reply to Dethnite256 [2019-10-04 23:55:41 +0000 UTC]
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Pooptato1341 In reply to Dethnite256 [2019-10-09 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]
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UnderSwap7 [2019-02-01 14:59:01 +0000 UTC]
S1. hehe, yeah. we saw a movie applied to her age.
U2. Hey Paps, did you watch the horror movie I let you borrow?
P3. Yes I did! Frisk couldn't sleep alone after it so she slept with Sans.
S4. oh no...
T5. Sans, you watched a horror movie!?
S6. i'm dead...
T7. *sigh* We will talk about this later Sans. I still have to make dinner.
S8. i'm saved...?
T9. I'm making something very delicious I saw in a cook book.
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REVIEWERII [2017-10-04 07:04:54 +0000 UTC]
Skeleton soup.
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sukoptysiu [2017-08-24 21:30:54 +0000 UTC]
HES SAVE
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Greywalker2 [2017-05-29 15:25:41 +0000 UTC]
My English proficiency is only at mediocre level... but i noticed a few mistakes here and there...
The obvious ones being:
1. Saw... we use "watched" a movie/ or just use "we had a movie night"
2. Applied to her age = suits her age
3. borrow = borrowed, Can't sleep alone... Couldn't (past tense)
4. Sans, we'll talk about this later
5. I will prepare something delicious I read in a cookbook.
Despite everything, i still love the comic you made. I am here late and i am glad that you keep the comic going!!
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DiscordLexia In reply to Greywalker2 [2018-09-06 23:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes. This reads like it was written by one who does not actually speak English. Which I can respect, learning a second language is hard, but perhaps it may be worth considering finding someone bilingual to translate it instead.
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PlotholeBrigade [2017-02-17 15:00:46 +0000 UTC]
After you think that Frisk's just biologically female, here comes the reveal that Frisk's cis female.
Your average reader says:
"WHAT?! FRISK IS A THEY YOU FUCK!!"
But they ignore this, probably thinking it's an AU...
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PlotholeBrigade In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-02-27 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]
It only follows that I've read an portuguese version of the comic that fixes all the typos, and I should know that a bad comic fandom is predictable as fuck.
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PlotholeBrigade In reply to freeRobuc [2017-10-07 21:38:50 +0000 UTC]
I've actually backtracked from this one.
See, Frisk's gender is ambiguous, not non-binary. It's as ambiguous as Chara's morality.
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freeRobuc In reply to PlotholeBrigade [2017-10-10 15:01:55 +0000 UTC]
We will see the truth in the best webcomic worldwide, "gendertale"
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PetrichorLost [2016-10-09 04:23:38 +0000 UTC]
The grammar..............................
WHY IS TORIEL MAD THAT HER KID WATCHED A HORROR MOVIE
IF I WERE A MUM
I'D BE MORE UPSET ABOUT THE SLEEPING WITH SANS BIT
(totally not just from jealous ahaha)
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LinkTahuterasuSpirit [2016-08-27 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]
to be far shouldn't Toriel be mad at undyne? she's the one that gave them the movie
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UnderSwap7 In reply to LinkTahuterasuSpirit [2017-01-13 02:28:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes but Sans and Papyrus were the ones to show Frisk the movie.
.3.
Papyrus is to innocent to be blamed tho...
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Jang001 [2016-08-20 00:33:09 +0000 UTC]
Don't you mean "let you borrow"?
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raiken01 [2016-08-12 14:55:31 +0000 UTC]
Nooo Sans you can't die
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budderartist [2016-08-07 20:03:23 +0000 UTC]
He dead!
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