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LexaTara [2016-07-24 08:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Awww cute
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ShadowOri [2015-03-15 08:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Interesting and impressive character, I like many things about the design of this character, mainly the personality, though that's usually the important part~
Do you need help updating this character? Or are you fine on your own?
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animalpainter In reply to ShadowOri [2015-03-15 10:17:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! :3 I'm quite proud of her if I do say so myself cx
I'm welcome to any suggestions ^^
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ShadowOri In reply to animalpainter [2015-03-15 10:28:08 +0000 UTC]
Great to hear!
Suggestions... Well, I can help you improve this character through a simple self applied process... I suggest listing the basic personality traits then trying to add more basic personality traits if there is room for more personality traits... The next step is to put after each personality trait, some more detail about the personality trait and what goes on in her mind in terms of way-of-thinking to form her personality trait.
After going into the personality traits, you then explain in what point of her back story, does she develop this way of thinking... Consider what she has experienced from the beginning until now, not only that, but show she interpreted it, for two people can have similar experiences but act differently due to a "way of interpretation" picked up by either, earlier experiences, or by nature.
And if you're stuck, I'll see if I can help you out~
Also.
On a side note, I have made my own character... But I have not been able to draw him.
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ShadowOri In reply to animalpainter [2015-03-15 20:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Mhmm. Well, if there isn't any back story possibilities that lead to more personality development, like her harsh past giving her difficulty expressing positive emotions in response to things she doesn't usually feel, such as generosity.
I could ask some questions with hints to possible personality traits and backstory components.
And sure!
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animalpainter In reply to ShadowOri [2015-03-16 01:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I didn't really want her to be bitter since the one that killed her father (Shen) died, so she had to sort of come to terms with that and start anew :3
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ShadowOri In reply to animalpainter [2015-03-16 05:21:32 +0000 UTC]
She could interpret it like that, maybe she had some wisdom to guide her in the right direction?.. It's either from her parents/background, or where she currently stays.
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ReidakVizsla [2015-02-22 21:03:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow I am Impressed but I don't know if she could take on my character because he seems more stronger than she does.
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animalpainter In reply to ReidakVizsla [2015-02-22 22:58:59 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you! Is your character a wolf too? :3 She isn't the strongest of her kind but is still pretty tough ^^ But yeah in a battle of strength she's more likely to lose c:
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ReidakVizsla In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-22 23:23:01 +0000 UTC]
He's a tiger who's blind but can fight blindly harder stronger faster than anyone else.
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ReidakVizsla In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-23 01:22:07 +0000 UTC]
Yep. He could see through disguises any couldn't find weaknesses he could even tell if you're behind him, No matter his good you are at shuffling your feet or at stealth (To him your footsteps and silent creeping or hovering, climbing, & breathing sounds likes drumbeats to him)
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ReidakVizsla In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-23 05:16:58 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Loud sonic sounds and foul odor smell:
Sound: ([if Close in range] Gongs, Large bells, Sharp loud screeching noises, Firecrackers)
Smell: (Burnt cigarettes, Bad hygiene, Venomous toxic poisonous smells, or any strong odor)
This could mess up the images in his head to make him unable to see unless he use his club to make a echoe sound to re-direct his 'Vision'
Also this could cause excruciating pain for him unless he is able to restrain it he'll be under a lot of pain until his abilities are restored back to their normal ways
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animalpainter In reply to ReidakVizsla [2015-02-23 06:26:00 +0000 UTC]
Ohh that's cool! It makes sense I guess to since they say when you lose one sense the others grow stronger ^^
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DehAlligator [2015-02-22 18:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice m8
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Procar [2015-02-22 16:10:30 +0000 UTC]
huuhu, she looks like if she could steal the all food of your house, XD
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animalpainter In reply to Procar [2015-02-22 22:59:29 +0000 UTC]
Haha at some point she might have! xD
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Procar In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-22 23:11:49 +0000 UTC]
uhm...I knew it...I knew it...XD
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Procar In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-23 19:07:11 +0000 UTC]
o.o, uhm...what that's means eaxctly? XD
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Procar In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-24 00:11:21 +0000 UTC]
ah...ok, now I get you, ty for explaining me, ^^ but well, she is still awesome for me, ^^
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animalpainter In reply to Procar [2015-02-24 00:47:20 +0000 UTC]
No problem! ^^
I'm glad you like her :3 It's not that she's bad, she's just a little...misguided xD
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Procar In reply to animalpainter [2015-02-24 10:19:29 +0000 UTC]
uhm....hehee, ok, only misguided, heheh, X3
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