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i took this as i was walking back to the car thismorning .. i love the way the light is shining through the trees .!hi i would love some feedback on this picture....how would you have shot this scene?
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I like it a lot and maybe I agree with *Jewzeejew about the colour part!
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thanks hun .. yea it would have looked better in B&W ..
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Well, seen as the most conspicuous part of this pic is the shadows below the trees with the light surroudning them, and the fact that it's such a small part of this pic, I'd move a bit to where they'd be more noticeable.
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thanks for the feedback, i have one on my page a bit closer to the trees ...
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id love to take a walk through this patch of green with a lighted stick in my hand and a can of icecold coke in the other. (winds are cool, breeze is fine, sun sinking into the horizon, and a smile from someone so divine... the conclusion of a beautiful day)
thankyou for the upload.
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you are most welcome ..thank you for commenting ..!
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Love it, only comment is a little more contrast. Great job.
~BAWC
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Thank you for your feedback it is much appreciated .
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The only thing I reckon could be better - and this is being really, really petty now - is that not quite enough sky is shown. Maybe a tiny bit more would give a better sense of place?
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Thank you for your comment and advice, it is much appreciated ..!
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Like so many others, I think grayscales (black & white) or muted colors. Love the angle though!
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hmm...maybe I would try moving slightly to the right so there is sort of an avenue of trees visible?
but I really like this shot. it really has that wonderful early-morning-light feel!
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Thank you.. i supose in a way i was trying to capture that kind of feel to it to with the trees framing the pathway ... im pleased you like it ..! and once again thank you for your comments and your time ..!
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yep, well I did definitely get that feeling from the image! you're very welcome ^^
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love the photo, its a wonderful autumn shot....my only wish is that you captured the whole tree on the right it seems a little cropped as it stands...very nice tho!
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thank you im pleased you like it ..! and thank you for commenting, its much appreciated ..!
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Nice angle and lightning, but I would like to see original photo, not this sepia version...
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Thank's for the feedback, much appreciated ..this is the original photo, i shot it in sepia, however i am considering going back and taking some more shots ..! once again thank you for your time ..
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My proposition:
reduce the image section to the trees on the right (where the light comes from) and remove the sepia a little bit.
cheers
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Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated .... my main focus was on the pathway and the dark and light between the two sides, once again thanks for taking the time to comment ...
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I can only give you my amateur impression
I really like this shot... Seems like a lovely place... the colors give it a nostalgic old atmosphere...
I wouldn't change the angle of the shot, but perhaps I'd would have tried to catch a moment when the light was stronger, or more centered... (like coming off the end of the path, I'm a fan of contrast...)
Another suggestion would be to see how the shot woulds look in colors or in black and white... it could create some other interesting effects... it really depends on what impression you want to show...
Anyway, hope this helped...
Nice Work!!!!
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Your amateur impression is as valuable to me as a expert one and i thank you for taking the time to give feedback ...
I'm chuffed you like it that is exactley what i was aiming for regarding a nostalgic old atmosphere and yes as a few people have said about trying it in different colours and light variations, i should have stuck around for a little longer but unfortunately i had ran out of time and had to get back... lucky the scene is only 10 min's away so i can go back any time and have a play around with the scene a little more ... once again thank you for taking time out of your day ..!
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I'm glad it was helpful...
Looking forward to see any more shots you may take...
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I'd have taken the picture a bit more to the right so that you could see the straight path withought distractions (the left tree in this picture). And I'd have tilted it a bit to the right, or not have tilted it to the left 
Try taking pictures in colour, then if you'd like to have it in bw or sepia you can just change it on the computer.
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Thanks for adding feedback, my main focus was the path between the trees and the dark and light areas but thank you for your perspective i really should have played with the scene much more..at the moment im trying really hard not to use the computer to edit the pictures iv just upgraded to my first DSLR and im trying to figure it out and be happy with the image as it is, you know like capturing a moment just as you meant it to be at that time ..! once again thank you for your comments ..!
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heeey this pic is awesome... great job
ammm but i would change the angle a lil and go closer to the ground to increase the impact of the trees over the leaves on the ground
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Thanks for the feedback, yea i should have played around with the scene much more..the grate thing is it's not far away so i can go back when i have a little more time..once again thank you for your comment .!
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hey no prob...
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I would've done the exact same thing you did and shot it again from a lower position. Like setting the camera down on the ground and aim it and then shot the picture. 
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Hi thanks for the feedback.. i usually do spend more time shooting a scene but i had ran out of time on this day and really had to get back.. no i don't live on a farm but the countryside round here is stunning this was shot about ten min's out of town ...once again thank you for the comment ..!
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You're welcome. And your gallery is very nice
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hmm. The sky is completely white so I had expected to see some 100% blacks but I can see any. Try making the dark things darker and your picture will look a lot more contrasting. Its a nice nature shot =]
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Thank you for your feedback ..!
i usually do shoot things much darker than this but i was trying to capture as much light as i could without overexposing it ...once again thank you for your comments ..!
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I think I would have gotten on the ground and taken a picture of the leaves and bottom of the tree, but far enough back to where the light shining could be seen in the background. It is a lovely capture!
For this particular angle though, I think black and white would suit it better. And then playing around with the contrast and greyscale shades could improve it and make a bigger impact
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Thank you for your feedback.. im chuffed you like it, i am going to go back and take some more shots in different tones and see what i come up with mixing some of the different ideas people have suggested....once again thank you for your comments and advice ..!
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That would be a great idea! It's how a photographer grows 
You're most welcome 
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Hmmmm... I would have shot this picture from as many angles as I could have! One looking up from the ground, one from around the tree and all over! I love the leaves on the path!
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Thanks for the feedback ..!
i usually do but lack of time limited me, im going to go back and shoot some more tho ..! once again thank you for the feedback ..!
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Yeah, lack of time can be annoying! I'm glad it helped!
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Ooh, I love this photo. I personally like the brown in it. The light shining through the trees gives the perfect amount of distinction between an orchard and a beauitful photo.
Overall very suttle and beautiful!
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Thank you im glad you like it and thank you for taking the time to comment ..!
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I love the light, it's absolutely stunning! I think it would be more effective if you bumped up the contrast, and maybe had it in color, though. Right now it seems a little washed out.
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Thank you for your comments and suggestion, im pleased you like it ..!
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Like others have said, desaturating the colours might have been a bit better than using sepia. A higher contrast would also bring out the light coming through the trees more.
As for how I'd actually shoot it, I'd probably have the path a little further to the left, to go with the rule of thirds. Apart from making the image slightly different from a lot of others which follow the same basic concept, it would allow more of the light coming through the trees into the picture. You can probably get an idea of how it would look just by cropping it or something in the short term. It's just something to think about
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