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AntiDarkHeart — TSoYS Issue 1 - Page 2
Published: 2014-05-27 16:02:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 3670; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 0
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EDIT 2: Small character tweaks, small additions, and background tweaks.EDIT: Page 2 has now been revamped! Also Whitewind got a new makeover.
gave me permission to upload the previous pages (before my work was involved) so it'd be easier for you all to find and read C:
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I am soooo in love with these pages *_* they look absolutely gorgeous and the detail in them is amazing. One thing I noticed while reading this page though was that in the bottom panels the sun is STILL setting and in the same position even though its meant to be 2 hours later. Maybe it would flow better if you took the "two hours later" text out? If its not super important, that is. 
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you like them!
Hmm, I definitely see what you mean. Originally it use to say "One Hour Later", perhaps we could change it back to that and also make the sun higher in the first panel.
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I've never been there :C
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