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Tspin [2014-11-29 16:31:05 +0000 UTC]
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Its a nice render, and a nice idea, but could use a bit more, well just more. So I like the Sepia/mech idea, but your "polluted planet" idea runs into some of the same look as steampunk, but graphically its not as gritty. What I mean by that is that if you were doing it steampunk, you'd dirty it up a bit, in the "Space 1889" vein; here under the sepia tones, you have a very smooth render.
So what would I do with something like this? I like the idea of a polluted "robot city", but you'd sell that idea with a lot more robots. A big one on the foreground, and many more in the streets behind, for example.
Just in terms of this image, you've got a nice contrast between the red glow on the weapons, and the monotone of everything else, you might try bumping up the saturation of those gun glows. Take a look at the great homebrew CG video "Panic Attack", which appeared on Youtube about five years ago:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dadPWβ¦
It was by a Uruguayan director, Fede Alvarez, and it got him a movie deal. Its terrific, and similar in tone to what you're doing here, should give you some ideas of what you can do to extend this idea. Its worth it, because its eerie and effective.
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AOGRAI In reply to Tspin [2014-11-30 00:23:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your comments. It is indeed a good idea. I will try to remember this for my future works.
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AOGRAI In reply to x-bossie-boots-x [2014-12-21 04:33:44 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHA thanks... I was just messing about with some lighting.
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NeilV [2014-11-30 00:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Nice work
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AOGRAI In reply to NeilV [2014-11-30 06:24:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks bro!
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red-creations [2014-11-29 14:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, very cool image. Well done.Β
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red-creations In reply to AOGRAI [2014-12-01 17:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, for now i have enough work. Maybe next year, i order 2 of them. Β
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stevieb620 [2014-11-29 13:09:11 +0000 UTC]
that is one mean lookin' beast..
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AOGRAI In reply to stevieb620 [2014-11-29 16:15:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank u. Β It is actually quite a nice robot. Β Only shoots after the count of 3!
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JALpix [2014-11-29 01:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Love the robot Yaz, the colours i find far too weak, sorry fella
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AOGRAI In reply to JALpix [2014-11-29 01:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I know it is not my best work... I was trying out a test piece. Β Lighting is not that great either and the I put in too much blur effects too. Β But I kinda felt it reminded me of some comic I used to read.
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JALpix In reply to AOGRAI [2014-12-01 10:15:36 +0000 UTC]
I love your work and this robot too Yaz, I just think the colours could be more apocolyptic if you know what I mean.
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AOGRAI In reply to JALpix [2014-12-02 01:31:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I do... I was just messing around ya know... Just wanted to put out a signal that I am not 6 feet under! Lol!
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AOGRAI In reply to JALpix [2014-12-02 19:54:10 +0000 UTC]
LOL!
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AOGRAI In reply to Ermingild [2014-11-29 00:34:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank ye matey!
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AOGRAI In reply to ArtBennyRGrau [2014-11-29 00:34:15 +0000 UTC]
HAHAHA yeah it has that feel.
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