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ArieneX — practice 2
Published: 2013-01-18 02:22:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 874; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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my second practice, looks better but still needs work~ critique is welcomed o3o
done in sai on one layer
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working in one layer? yikes I like her eyes the neck is a bit thin though
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The eyes are wonderful! The details and colors of them really make them stand out. Her nose looks a little off though, like right now it kind of looks like a ball with nostrils. You have some shading on it and that helps, but I feel like it's too simple and still needs a lot more shaping done. It kind of looks like you were going for a button nose type thing, so I googled button nose and this looks pretty good and I think it might help you for a ref: [link] . If you lowered her nostrils and added more definition between the ball of the nose and the sides, it would make a huge difference. The lips you did a nice job on, really good shading on them. The last thing is her neck looks a little too narrow, so next time try to make it a little bit thicker and it will be perfect. You did a really nice job on this so far, just keep practicing!
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I really like the background and the softness of the skin.
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She looks really pretty. Very nice work for only using one layer 
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thank you so much for you kind comment
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She's nice ! But a little bit more details (in her skin, her hair) would have been great
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it is my second practice xD but i agree c:
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face shouldn't be so plane.. add more colors and shadows
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Don't be afraid of shadows and hard edges! Everything except the eyes looks so blurry at moment and there's no depth. Take a look at photos and the reality to see how light works on faces. That could help you a lot. Just keep practising
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Lovely work, not bad for a second practice. Maybe experiment some more with shading and proportions
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thanks for the comment 0_0 but I have a question, what proportions are out of place exactly, because honestly i keep staring at it so i can correct it, but i don't know what.
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I think the eyes are just a wee bit too far apart? You are very welcome!
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I like it, but I'm not a big fan of it. It feels as if it is missing something, and I think the proportions are off a bit.
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It's missing clothes >w> lol but I see where you are coming from xD as for proportions, they probably are c:
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I like those simli hair and highlightet eyes but skin needs why more schadowa, also try looks more on photos how nose in front looks like, i know its hard to get right sometimes.
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awesome look! perfect style.. and very misterious.. waht's going on here?? I know it has a story
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Lol how did you know that it has a story? O: is it because it's the only picture with a background ? xD
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yeah it just has that feel.. so is there a story?
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yeah xD its one of my few oc's for whom i actually developed a story and to be honest this character is the reason why i even started drawing. I'll probably post the whole nine yards about this character later on c:
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