nmmi-nut [2010-10-06 03:52:26 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Compared with the lines on which it's based, this is shockingly detailed. And I don't mean the detail on the feathers which you probably slaved over. What I mean is that you've created depth with the flaming-ashes effect, and the owl's eyes are sharp and intelligent rather than so small they are blurred.
I wish that you'd given the poor thing a branch, but it works either way. There is the illusion of a branch because of the fierce grip one of it's feet is contorted into. Love it. Actually I think that I love the feet most of all out of this, they are very well done and feel quite realistic.
Another thing which I appreciate and applaud in comparing this with it's predecessor is the iron gear which the owl is holding. When I first saw the old one a few days ago, the ring was hard to distinguish and at first I thought it was a weird David Bowie/Ziggy Stardust circle. But with this you've gone an extra mile, and if I would have to pick a favorite aspect of this I would choose the gear!
The gushing is mostly done, now for the gritty stuff...Do owls have more depth to their faces? I don't generally look at owls, save for when I watch Labyrinth, so I don't really know. I just feel like it's eyes could be set farther back into it's head and it's beak protrude a little farther out of it's face. Hmmm...I believe that's all I've got for you, though.
...I love the feathers. Lots. You've made me a whole lot more excited to see that owls movie now...Like whoa...
I gave vision 3/5 because I like it I just don't know anything of it's context (Abolitionist Informer? Tell more?) but it's still pretty!
3.5/5 on originality because you can definitely see that this is based on the older lines, but the addition of color makes it an entirely new beast. Also: orange sparklies.
4.5/5 on technique because every painting I see nowadays by you shows so much growth that I can't even think about it coherently. A year and a half ago this would have still been beautiful, but you've matured a lot in making lighting behave as well as depth of figure...And I think the orange sparklies fall into this too...
5/5 on impact because it's beautiful. I've been thinking of doing a critique on this since you put it up. I just had reading and dinner to take care of and I couldn't stop reviewing the details in my head. And also it made me think of David Bowie like 3 or 4 times (Ziggy, Labyrinth, others) and anytime something prompts me to think of David Bowie I'm super stoked.
Yes.
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fiatlux3721 [2010-10-15 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Daaayum! What are they teaching you in college?! This is super-pretty. You've gotten, like, 100% percent better in the six-odd months I've been devwatching you!
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