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Published: 2009-06-15 08:10:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description And every time I speak your name,
it takes ten minutes to recover
from the ease of the smile that
graces my lips; the taste
of the two syllables, lingering on
the tip of my tongue; and
the sudden rush of air that echoes
in the hole in my chest, an emptiness
waiting to be filled by your return.
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Comments: 4

ShylaBlu [2009-06-15 22:25:36 +0000 UTC]

the sudden rush of air that echoes
in the hole in my chest, an emptiness
waiting to be filled by your return

Lovely writing, as always. I love how you can so easily out into words these simple moments that are always so hard to describe.

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arliddian In reply to ShylaBlu [2009-06-16 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you; your comment really made me smile.

(And thank you for the fav!)

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YouInventedMe [2009-06-15 21:48:54 +0000 UTC]

the taste
of the two syllables, lingering on
the tip of my tongue; and
the sudden rush of air that echoes

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arliddian In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-06-16 01:17:23 +0000 UTC]

! Thank you!

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