Comments: 15
starlight138 [2008-09-14 12:49:44 +0000 UTC]
aws.
this was a really good chapter!! I cant wait for the next one. I sense Ari being not to happy about this.
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TheEyedropperTheory [2008-09-14 07:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha! I said, didn't I? Either Damien keeping an eye on him or one of the Frozen. My thoughts were correct!
Loved the description of the dog's death by the way. I mean, I'm a huge animal lover, especially dogs, but that gave me shivers. I don't think it really needs to be matured though, but, meh. That's just my thoughts.
<33 Eyedropper.
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bunnyqueen09 [2008-09-13 21:55:15 +0000 UTC]
aww the poor dogs
and wow its that close to the ending? for some reason it seems like only yesterday or a week ago you started XD
but this is a really nice chapter ^^
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Narutolove101 [2008-09-13 21:36:43 +0000 UTC]
i imagined the dog like the one in that movie 'the lady in the water' *shiver* i'm not scared of real wolves/dogs, but the horror movie ones.... eep >.<
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Narutolove101 In reply to ArmageddonChild [2008-09-15 12:34:22 +0000 UTC]
lol, I liked it to!!! ^ ^
that narrator guy was funny, I felt bad for him though... didn't the dog eat him or something (i havn't seen it in a while)
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