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Art-e86 — The Eye
Published: 2010-05-17 22:18:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 396; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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Description I see a figure in The Eye
Mischievious Pan a-riding by?
A Pegasus with mighty wings
Inside The Eye I see these things.

I see a window open wide
A million storms and more beside
A molecule and Saturns' rings
With My Bright Eye I see these things.

I see a figure, just a shape
A parasite, a clumsy ape
A man with plague, the bringer brings
In My Minds' Eye I see these things.

I am that man, that awkward child
The leech that bleeds the world beguiled
I fight the sleep that smothers, clings
To close My Eyes to all these things

Awaken now and shake yourselves
You worm-eaten books on dusty shelves
Be opened, be leafed, be all that it brings
Allow Your Eyes to see these things.
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Comments: 15

megalobo [2010-06-05 11:41:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm bemused before such work! Impressive

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Art-e86 In reply to megalobo [2010-06-06 21:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Megalobo glad you liked it.

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megalobo In reply to Art-e86 [2010-06-07 13:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!!

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spiitze [2010-05-26 23:49:13 +0000 UTC]

very cool :]

like a fridge

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Art-e86 In reply to spiitze [2010-05-28 19:33:46 +0000 UTC]

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valtameri-kuolema [2010-05-19 10:40:37 +0000 UTC]

My God, I think this one will be my favourite of your words! Last lines in every part are really giving me a thrill... great work!

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Art-e86 In reply to valtameri-kuolema [2010-05-19 18:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your very kind comments valtameri.

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valtameri-kuolema In reply to Art-e86 [2010-05-19 19:21:11 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome my friend ^^

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Art-e86 In reply to valtameri-kuolema [2010-05-19 19:36:34 +0000 UTC]

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scaramouche16 [2010-05-18 23:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, awesome. I like the last stanza especially.

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Art-e86 In reply to scaramouche16 [2010-05-19 18:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks scaramouche, really appreciated.

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J-2-the-Rad [2010-05-18 14:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Great piece

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Art-e86 In reply to J-2-the-Rad [2010-05-18 17:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks

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pencilswordsman [2010-05-18 03:00:45 +0000 UTC]

holy crap dude that's an awesome poem and I'm not just saying that because I'm mentioned it really is good

ps thanks, and happy to inspire such a fantastic piece

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Art-e86 In reply to pencilswordsman [2010-05-18 13:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks pencilswordsman - and thanks for the inspiration!!

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