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Published: 2011-07-04 22:39:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 521; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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This is a drawing I wanted to do for a looong time. I mean I always wanted to make something using the Moe style and related to summer. I think it turned out pretty well... What do you think guys?? Anyway I hope you all like it!!
Have a nice summer!
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MOE-NESS... SO CUTE. *cough* Anyway, I've seen this picture in several clubs I'm in and finally decided to comment on it. It's very cute. And anatomically it looks pretty good. (except for the elbow whose shape is off.) But I'm going to point out a few things about the details that I think could be better. The left hand looks like it's in a grasping position. Yet it's not grasping anything? I think you could add some folds in her clothing so it looks like she's grasping her dress. Her headband also seems like it just disappears into her head. I think some hair overlapping it more naturally would fix that. Those are the two things I really noticed. But it's still a cute piece, I love the style.
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thanks for the advices! This is the reason why I joined DA! Although her hand is not looking wierd..I mean try to hold a plate like that and look in the mirror. I will look identicaly. Anyway thanks a lot
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Oh no, I'm sorry, I didn't mean the hand holding the plate. That one does look fine. I meant the hand that's in a fist. That's where I was trying to direct the advice. Which like I said, that hand is drawn fine but it would look more natural if she was clutching the dress with some folds showing.
And no problem! Glad to help.
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and I didn't want to use the mad emoticon in my last message. I don't know why it turned out that way.... 
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lol, it's okay. XD I do that to sometimes.
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ooo yes well it wasn't designed to look like that. She is just holding her hand on her leg but closed. I didn't want her to hold her dress. If I wanted I would surely made her holding the material
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Well it's your picture, you can do what you wish. 
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Thanks! And one more thing! I hope you understand that I appreciate and thank you for your suggestions. I didn't think they were critiques.
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No problem once more. Oh and don't worry, I knew that. Most people do.
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