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SueaNoi In reply to ??? [2018-11-15 15:49:53 +0000 UTC]
The pattern is the character design? I think it's fair that the design is a little unrealistic to it makes it possible to draw them again and again consistently .
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PoisonRose321 In reply to SueaNoi [2018-11-16 15:18:51 +0000 UTC]
well... yah I guess I didn't think of that. I always make them random and repeat tho.
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SueaNoi In reply to PoisonRose321 [2018-11-17 11:24:25 +0000 UTC]
That's your design choice. It is not wrong to do random dots. But this is Arven's design choice. It doesn't make the leopard look any less "realistic", only stylized, which is useful for artist since it's easily repeatable and useful for audience because it's recognizable.
Thus, I rated your critique "unfair".
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PoisonRose321 In reply to SueaNoi [2018-11-18 03:46:16 +0000 UTC]
Its critiquing how i see it
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SueaNoi In reply to PoisonRose321 [2018-11-18 14:58:55 +0000 UTC]
This is my critiquing your critique as I see it.
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Sanluris [2019-01-26 12:53:19 +0000 UTC]
What, you wanted to be eaten? I guess he hates feeling like he owes someone.
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PinkPupz [2018-11-28 22:33:25 +0000 UTC]
Chui's gonna trick Kafil into siding with him I just know it! :0
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XSamuraiEdgeX [2018-11-22 11:48:26 +0000 UTC]
i smell scheming and manipulation coming up.
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bryonygriffiths [2018-11-22 09:47:48 +0000 UTC]
Nice TLK reference ^_^
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Layalu [2018-11-21 19:30:38 +0000 UTC]
not wanting to sound like a creep, but those scars are incredibly satisfying to look at
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Midway2009 [2018-11-21 17:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice work
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R-FakonWolf [2018-11-21 17:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Do this young man ever felt grateful to Abasi?...
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Scxash [2018-11-20 21:30:01 +0000 UTC]
can't wait to see more
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LostDaydreams [2018-11-17 18:49:53 +0000 UTC]
The passive aggressive comebacks are off the chart!
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BeastMaster09 [2018-11-17 13:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Kafil is gonna try and fight Abasi for the leadership of the herd
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Schizoid3 [2018-11-17 04:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Kafil is gonna do something stupid, isn't he
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Hunting-wolf [2018-11-16 20:18:59 +0000 UTC]
Aaah Kafil, get away from him. Don't be stupid enough to trust Chui - he'll just eat you, and everyone else.
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WolfenLynxKipjen [2018-11-16 15:37:12 +0000 UTC]
casual small talk w/ ur meal
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Waikku [2018-11-16 15:24:48 +0000 UTC]
A casual conversation between predator and prey.
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Ticklicous [2018-11-16 04:15:04 +0000 UTC]
The sweet taste of manipulation.
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Whulft [2018-11-15 20:30:20 +0000 UTC]
They are totally going to conspire together, I can feel it. And I am really liking those new scars, he truly deserved them.
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ICosmicPotato [2018-11-15 17:30:51 +0000 UTC]
Kafil. Leopard. Run for your life dummy
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Zcat91819 [2018-11-15 05:22:00 +0000 UTC]
.......Yeah, no, they're gonna become partners.
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fastenjaw In reply to Zcat91819 [2018-11-15 14:58:45 +0000 UTC]
Kafil and Chui should totally team up! They might even grow to love each other and have little zeapard hybrids running around in the Savanna! It would be beautiful!!!....
Ok maybe no kids. But it would still be highly amusing to see Kafil giving rides to Chui!
Great page! I sense revenge plot forming with Kafil. Only I think both will be getting eaten by Chui somewhere down the road. Or at least Kafil since Chui isn't trust worthy.
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fastenjaw In reply to Zcat91819 [2018-11-15 14:56:26 +0000 UTC]
Kafil and Chui should totally team up! They might even grow to love each other and have little zeapard hybrids running around in the Savanna! It would be beautiful!!!....
Ok maybe no kids. But it would still be highly amusing to see Kafil giving rides to Chui!
Great page! I sense revenge plot forming with Kafil. Only I think both will be getting eaten by Chui somewhere down the road. Or at least Kafil since Chui isn't trust worthy.
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Zcat91819 In reply to fastenjaw [2018-11-16 03:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Maybe, we'll have to wait and see.
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fastenjaw In reply to fastenjaw [2018-11-15 15:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Sorry Zcat. Message was meant for Arven. Even after clearing my cache, message was auto replied to yours.
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Rakusaru [2018-11-15 02:38:15 +0000 UTC]
Kafil is very brave to look away from Chui several times while talking to him, just to make faces.
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StardustAstro [2018-11-15 01:24:45 +0000 UTC]
"do I know you?"
"oooh yeah, you just tried to kill me that one time"
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Famai [2018-11-15 00:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Kafil is the son of Abasi? (thats how it is in nature)
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world-of-zekira [2018-11-14 23:24:06 +0000 UTC]
The enemy of my enemy.... uh oh.
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Anubis-hound [2018-11-14 23:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Uh oh. Someone's got a chip on their shoulder.
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NINADOR [2018-11-14 23:11:58 +0000 UTC]
Awesome as always. Still I don't know an artist who creates with such an inventive, elaborated style like yours. The story is amazing too, and the characters who appear in it. Congrats!
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Sabreleopard [2018-11-14 22:07:08 +0000 UTC]
I have to say I'm pretty impressed with Kafil talking to Chui (a predator) in a calm way and how he brought up the past when he was just a foal. But man, oh man! Kafil is sure ungrateful of the fact that Abasi just SAVED his life! He should grateful that he survived thanks to Abasi. Maybe he's just mad because Abasi shamed him in front of the herd after Africa's attack. But something tells me he's thinking about plotting with Chui.
Well, Chui did say Kafil was either brave or stupid coming into his territory. Well, to answer that, I'd say both. Kafil seems very brave of talking to Chui in a way that he owns the savannah (very macho I'll say). But he is also stupid if he so much as thinks he could use Chui's help in usurping Abasi. Chui well just double cross him, just like how he did it to Bibi. Anything Kafil should know is that when you're in prey society (and especially if you're prey yourself), never trust a predator! But overall, this is getting very interesting so far.
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DevilAntRat In reply to Sabreleopard [2018-11-14 23:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Well I would say Chui being opportunistic as he is would like to have the a lead stallion as an ally..
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Sabreleopard In reply to DevilAntRat [2018-11-14 23:07:56 +0000 UTC]
I see, good point. Chui can sure use him (though I'm not sure if Kafil's okay with sacrificing some of his herd members to satisfy Chui's hunger...).
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DevilAntRat In reply to Sabreleopard [2018-11-14 23:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Maybe the bolder and stronger sons that are too young to take him on but will probably do so in a year or so..
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Sabreleopard In reply to DevilAntRat [2018-11-15 01:24:59 +0000 UTC]
Right, of course. Zebras are just like lions when it comes to generations, males often try and get rid of the young of the previous stallions they've just defeated and whose herds they take over, even if they have to kill them. Same thing happens with gorillas and hippos.
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Wyvern-1 In reply to Sabreleopard [2018-11-14 22:23:28 +0000 UTC]
A very insightful analysis of the situation. I, too, am wondering about Kafil's intentions...
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Sabreleopard In reply to Wyvern-1 [2018-11-14 22:43:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, we have wait, see, and find out soon (and thanks).
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Looweezah [2018-11-14 21:28:14 +0000 UTC]
Hm, back when Abasi was fighting Chui, was he already the herds's leader? I think you've mentioned every mare of the herd is his mate...if so, is he Kafil's father? OR, he took the leadership from the previous stallion, and that stallion was Kafil's father? Maybe it's part of the reason Kafil dislikes Abasi's authority?
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