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And after over 40 pages without forests, Arven is back drawing trees!

Okay, if last page took an eternity... this took two. But I had so much fun with it! Ladies and gentlemen, I give you GREEN SHADOWS! Most enjoyable shadows ever! I loved making the backgrounds and all the little dots of light on the floor and characters. They take long to make, but I really enjoy it^^

So, the Heroes are inside this new weird forest and... apparently they're not alone. Who will that shadowy wolf ever be? D8

Stay tuned!

Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)

I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!

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Comments: 395

Shina21 [2013-04-27 14:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


My first critique, and first comment on your gallery. Let's start:

-Intersting characters; everyone of them has his own temperament, his own way of thinking; great idea with their names, everyone of them is meaning something different;
-lovely pages; whole comic is a really, REALLY huge job; everything must be perfect, and estetic, anatomy, colours, background, shades, and I see, you're doing your best everytime, I don't see any mistakes on this comic;
-interesting story; comic is not just milions of beautiful drawings; story is more important, and, like I can see, you know it; seriously, I'm always waiting for next saturday, for next page;
-I love your unique style, and your unique way of doing this comic; most of people is doing their comic in digital, but you're not; you're traditional artist, and only "comic clouds with text" are in digital here;
-I haven't seen a comic with story like this; I love original stories, and this is one of them!

One big HUG for you, Arven, for that huge effort on it.
We love your arts, we love you, we are grateful that you are doing as amazing comic as Chakra for us.

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ARVEN92 In reply to Shina21 [2013-05-03 11:36:43 +0000 UTC]

OMG sorry for the lateness D8

I'm so happy you like this page and that you wrote this critique! <3 Truuly thanks a lot^^

It's true tat it always takes me a lot to make everything look good, characters, background, page flow, everything, and I'm seriously honoured that you appreciate all my efforts! <3

Truly thanks a lot! Your words mean so much to me!

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Shina21 In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-05 07:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey, no problem!
You just deserve it. <3

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ARVEN92 In reply to Shina21 [2013-05-05 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

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BlueMoonWolf101 [2013-04-27 14:06:26 +0000 UTC]

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Wow, Arven this is really good! It was so unpredictable! I love that! No one ever saw a forest inside a cave coming. It is totally five stars for originality! I liked the way you made the light coming through the leaves hit their fur. Like dapples of light here and there. It looks very realistic and believable! The second panel really caught my eye. The way you made the light really hit me. It gave me a great sense of their surroundings! I also like how on their fur the green from the trees is reflected. And the last panel really leaves us at a cliffhanger; we're all wondering who this person is. Are they friend or foe? Great job as always Arven! By the way, I just crack up at Motyl's face in the first panel! XD Keep up the good work!

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ARVEN92 In reply to BlueMoonWolf101 [2013-05-01 17:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you a lot hun! I'm so happy you like it! And thanks a lot for the critique! <333

Thank you for liking the dappling, it took me a lot to achieve that effect traditionally, but I'm satisfied with it

Hah! You shall know real soon who the wolf is <3 Truly thank you SO much once again! <3

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BlueMoonWolf101 In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-01 22:02:44 +0000 UTC]

no problem! i love your art

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ARVEN92 In reply to BlueMoonWolf101 [2013-05-04 23:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, I'm so honoured to hear that <3 Thanks!

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BlueMoonWolf101 In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-04 23:09:53 +0000 UTC]

np

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ARVEN92 In reply to BlueMoonWolf101 [2013-05-04 23:10:28 +0000 UTC]

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XXStigerstar [2013-04-27 13:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


*Squeals for annual Saturday chakra comic day*

Okay lets start before I go into fan girl mode....
Vision: WOW, Everything is so clear and beautiful, this must have taken you hours. You can see everything great besides in the last panel hielo is a little hard to make out but I think that's the point....so you are focused on this stranger( I think I know who he is but I am not going to say so you will all be surprised.)

Originally: Duh its a five out of five. Its SO original....who would have guessed their would be a forest? HOHO Not me for sure! I also love da preety little flowers.

Technique: Well my fav panels will to be the second one because of dat awesome tree and cool light its soooo awesome. And I love the last panel because of that strange wolf and I LOVE the outlining of the leaves, makes it stand out
Impact: YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY! I don't have to fix anything because its grrrrrreat hahhahaha so yup. 5/5 avren, nicely done! XD

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ARVEN92 In reply to XXStigerstar [2013-05-01 17:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, thank you SO much hun^^

I'm really honoured you like this page
And thank you for pointing Hielo out It's true that he looks a little hidden

Ohoho, truly thanks a lot! The panels took extra work here because of all the effects, and I'm seriously happy that you like them! Truly thanks a lot^^

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XXStigerstar In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-01 20:36:22 +0000 UTC]

hahahha. No problem! XD

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ARVEN92 In reply to XXStigerstar [2013-05-04 23:09:44 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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Cowofthewildfan [2017-11-21 01:15:01 +0000 UTC]

*cough* Stalker *cough, cough*

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ARVEN92 In reply to Cowofthewildfan [2017-11-24 14:03:59 +0000 UTC]

heheh!

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garrus368 [2017-08-20 03:46:10 +0000 UTC]

looks so cool

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ARVEN92 In reply to garrus368 [2017-08-26 14:23:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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pup-fu [2016-08-07 02:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Koburaa... I see ya!!

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ARVEN92 In reply to pup-fu [2016-08-07 23:22:09 +0000 UTC]

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TogepiTooCute4u [2016-07-05 20:27:43 +0000 UTC]

I see the little Naruto symbol!! :0

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ARVEN92 In reply to TogepiTooCute4u [2016-07-08 19:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Naruto symbol?

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TogepiTooCute4u In reply to ARVEN92 [2016-07-08 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes. There's an anime called Naruto, and it's main symbol is on the tree. It;s the small leaf pattern.

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ARVEN92 In reply to TogepiTooCute4u [2016-07-16 10:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh. That was unintentional then, I don't follow Naruto

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TogepiTooCute4u In reply to ARVEN92 [2016-07-16 16:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Haha, m'kay xD

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ARVEN92 In reply to TogepiTooCute4u [2016-07-29 20:34:40 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Maple-The-W0lf [2016-01-18 00:52:53 +0000 UTC]

MOTYL IS TO PRECIOUS FOR THIS WORLD.

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ARVEN92 In reply to Maple-The-W0lf [2016-01-18 14:40:53 +0000 UTC]

DAWW <3

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xFeatheredQueenx [2014-06-24 21:58:55 +0000 UTC]

arven in the second panel who's talking?

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ARVEN92 In reply to xFeatheredQueenx [2014-06-24 22:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Led is^^

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xFeatheredQueenx In reply to ARVEN92 [2014-06-24 22:24:55 +0000 UTC]

oh ok cause im doing the voice thingies for motyl so heh wanted to make sure :3
and how do u say uhhh Hielo

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ARVEN92 In reply to xFeatheredQueenx [2014-06-24 23:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Hoho sweet^^
Ah, "Hielo" is like "Yellow" with one "L"
Here's a list of all the character's names pronounced:  arven92.deviantart.com/journal…

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Dragondog2233 [2013-08-06 20:54:42 +0000 UTC]

IT'S AMATERASU'S SECRET GARDEN

LOOK IT MAKES SENSE:

She can make the sun shine cause she's the sun goddess!

She can make trees grow with bloom!

She can easily transport water with waterspout!

AND WE HAVE ALREADY SEEN THE BAKERY C':

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ARVEN92 In reply to Dragondog2233 [2013-08-09 16:28:31 +0000 UTC]

LOL XDDD

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Itrakat [2013-06-30 10:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Led,stop being such a brainy boffin.I mean it.x3

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-01 08:24:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL poor Led XD

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Itrakat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-01 10:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey,it's not OUR fault he's such a genius
I'm actually jealous lol

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-16 12:26:06 +0000 UTC]

XDDD Oh no don't be XD

(sorry for the late reply D8 DA randomly deletes my messages )

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Itrakat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-16 12:28:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh no about the late reply
Better late than nev!<3

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-16 12:35:03 +0000 UTC]

I agree XD 

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Itrakat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-16 12:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately,when you're late for school,that does not apply.

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-16 12:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Itrakat In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-07-16 12:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Its a sad world

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ARVEN92 In reply to Itrakat [2013-07-16 13:03:43 +0000 UTC]

It is indeed ;_;

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Cookie-Brooke [2013-05-16 14:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Wait a second, are those lunar flowers from Wolf's Rain?!!!!

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ARVEN92 In reply to Cookie-Brooke [2013-05-18 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah nope they're not XD It's actually a real flower named Kadupul, extremely rare: [link] That's why Kuma had never seen any before :'D

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Cookie-Brooke In reply to ARVEN92 [2013-05-18 23:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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ARVEN92 In reply to Cookie-Brooke [2013-05-19 13:02:31 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Ctougas01 [2013-05-03 10:33:21 +0000 UTC]

WAW les couleurs, les fonds!!! Magnifique x333

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ARVEN92 In reply to Ctougas01 [2013-05-03 11:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww mais merci^^

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