Vagos5 [2017-09-12 03:50:52 +0000 UTC]
the eye point on this is awesome . one thing tho is you see how the guy on the back Β is shooting at the same time with the same effect paste over, it makes it look as if you just copied other the guy, thing you can do to help that is by cutting the effect by half so it looks like he is shooting right after or! to have a bullet ahead of the gun and or To just have the effect off for him... even tho for that i still think it looks nice i'm just trying to dump tips out on ya, i really see your work moving fast and see that you have a good future in front, so keep it up
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