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Published: 2019-07-12 02:00:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 17849; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 0
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Hey everyone. Thank you so much for reading my comic. I hope you enjoyed the latest page.

I just wanted to give you a heads up that the next page I am going to have to split into 2 pages. My pages are usually around 12-15 panels, but this one was going to be more like 18-20 and some of them are quite detailed. So instead of making you wait 3-4 weeks, I figured I'd just do 2 smaller pages.... And then we are basically into the next part of the story (Act 3)! I can't wait for you to see what I have in store for you. 

Also, I am now posting my comic on Instagram at the same time as I am posting it here.
I made an official comic account: Out_of_action_comic

Anyway, as usual, Feedback is always welcome.

New pages every second or third Friday at 12pm Australian EST

***PLEASE DO NOT REPOST WITHOUT ASKING FIRST***
                        Don’t steal, just ask!

...............

Proof read by PsychokittyP

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Comments: 29

MotoNeko [2020-04-11 03:19:19 +0000 UTC]

One part i really find annoying in every episode is when Ladybug captures the akuma and says the exact same lines with the exact same cutscene. It's such a petpeeve of mine that it's translating to even this comic. Atleast it's Alya this time which is a small change but atleast a change.

I give you a thumbs up for Hawkmoth's ending line. You really got it down

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NuttyDog1337 [2019-08-05 22:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Alya... You watch too much Miraculous Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir.

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LoveevilM [2019-07-25 20:06:12 +0000 UTC]

the last panel tho! The light, everything...wow   

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AsheryW In reply to LoveevilM [2019-07-25 22:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really like how that one turned out... so moody

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MasterCortana117 [2019-07-16 15:35:51 +0000 UTC]

I bet Alya has wanted to do that for so long

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owllover132 [2019-07-15 17:40:44 +0000 UTC]

I love how she looks like Adam from how she's stuck on the painting

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AsheryW In reply to owllover132 [2019-07-15 21:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Me too 😋

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Kitty-ChatBlancN [2019-07-12 21:41:06 +0000 UTC]

lel rip hawkmoth, seems like he needs some help. I sooo badly want to see how mari's gonna be, I can't remember (should probably go back to that page) but how is she going to react when she doesn't have her miraculous?

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AsheryW In reply to Kitty-ChatBlancN [2019-07-12 21:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Only a couple more pages and you’ll find out 😉

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Kitty-ChatBlancN In reply to AsheryW [2019-07-12 23:05:57 +0000 UTC]

ugggh now I must wait in my fandom trashbin

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uglygosling [2019-07-12 21:38:49 +0000 UTC]

This story has actually grown on me...

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mayuralover [2019-07-12 18:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I feel like one of the panels should be "No more evildoing for you, little akuma" instead of "No more evilizing for you, little akuma."

Whoo, great page! I guess it's time to collect the miraculous and get back to Marinette!

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AsheryW In reply to mayuralover [2019-07-12 21:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Dang it, thanks for the heads up. If I remember when I start working later, I’ll fix it up

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Sret [2019-07-12 18:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Our next date will be at 26th. Can't wait. One day our love will be true Creeepy jokes aside, I have enjoyed this comic so much.

Perfect Hawkmoth ending monolog. Best part of any episode, he really seems to bringing his A game to this one.

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AsheryW In reply to Sret [2019-07-12 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, Thanks, I’m glad you’re enjoying it.

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EniracY [2019-07-12 16:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I love the ending monologue by Hawkmoth xD just like the show!

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AsheryW In reply to EniracY [2019-07-12 21:13:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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AinePL [2019-07-12 12:54:30 +0000 UTC]

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AsheryW In reply to AinePL [2019-07-12 13:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ☺️

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Ellysia1986 [2019-07-12 12:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Yesss!!! Good job guys! Fantastic comic! The fight scenes are soo well done and I am more than pleased with it so far but... How will Adrien deal with Marinette asleep back in his bedroom? Blame Chat? Appear as Chat to give the miraculous back? Walk in as Adrien? How will he be both at once?!

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AsheryW In reply to Ellysia1986 [2019-07-12 13:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I always appreciate the kind words.

As far as what’s to come... sorry but I ain’t gonna spoil it... (partly because I haven’t actually written it yet lol... I have an outline, but not the finer details)

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moreofafanficwriter [2019-07-12 07:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice exit monologue.

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AsheryW In reply to moreofafanficwriter [2019-07-12 07:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I started to freak out while I was working on the line art because hadn't given much thought to what he was going to say, but I had a friend suggest a few things and I combined and tweaked some of them

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LongshotLink [2019-07-12 05:14:30 +0000 UTC]

This is great, it's structured very well, and I could see this as an actual episode. Very well done!

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AsheryW In reply to LongshotLink [2019-07-12 05:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, that's how I was hoping the story would come across, more like an episode than a completely unrealistic fanfic lol

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Bowser14456 [2019-07-12 02:21:17 +0000 UTC]

Hawk Moth

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D3S1R33 [2019-07-12 02:19:46 +0000 UTC]

Welp, that's it for the akuma. Now, I wanna see how Mari's gonna handle the revelation Adrien witnessed.

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AsheryW In reply to D3S1R33 [2019-07-12 04:04:23 +0000 UTC]

I know, right? I can't wait to draw it

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JFkeinK [2019-07-12 02:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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