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ashpile — ALAW Chapter 1
Published: 2014-05-23 11:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description ( Stampy's P.OV)

 It started as a normal day in Minecraftia, a world made of blocks inhabited by animals, plant life and mobs.My two best friends    (L for Lee and iBallisticSquid) were just doing their own minecraft business that day: Squid was in his apartment- which he built next to my doghouse- finishing off the newly added extensions, the place gradually travelling deeper into the ocean, but he knew that it was eventually going to touch the sea floor.


Lee, on the other hand, was re-stocking Stampy's hot buns, the first building on the high street to be built, of course accompanied by Larry Love, the bear's pup. Opposite the bakery you had the florists, on the right of that, the clothes shop; so on.

I, Stampy, was stirring in the red-sheeted bed opposite Crimson Azoth's room, in which we had a 'room-off', to decide absolutely nothing. Nothing at all. Anyway, Craig (that's Crimson by the way) built one of his walls out of obsidian, with a funky pattern, while mine were out of snow.  I couldn't sleep the night before, a rough night had occurred in Stampy's Lovely World ......

I had dreamed about Hit The Target invading and stealing my 11 pets again : Barnaby, my oldest dog alive, Flippy, Spring, Sherbet, Benjy, Fluffy, Duncan, Benton, Corey, my puppy,Gregory J.R, the son, flesh and blood of my first ever dog in Minecraftia to be tamed, as well as Mittens, my fellow feline friend, the best cat in the entire world, who even has a kitty cat condo to herself !

However, last time Hit The Target came, instead of turning my animal buddies against me ( also the despicable plot of previous attempts to take over my Lovely World), that unforgivable pirate took advantage of my cloning device, and made a Hit The Target army!

But when L for Lee and I sneaked down to my top secret base, underwater, to confront him, he wasn't there. Hit The Target had escaped for the fourth time since I first thought I had killed him! But he had left a sign saying:
                                                        ' Your dogs WILL be mine one day- Hit The Target 
                                                                       
                                                                        P.S Your spa looks rubbish'
That was very offensive of him, especially since I had only marked out the base of the pretty kitty spa that very day.

Eventually, I drew open my eyelids, and gazed through the glass in front of me at my lovely waterfall. I then sat up on the edge of the minecraft bed, patiently waiting for L for Lee to pop out of somewhere and to hand over my breakfast cake, since I was a chubby, human sized cat.

After 10 minutes of waiting for Lee to join me, I quickly began to worry about him, since he normally comes to see me moments after my waking, but this time, he was late. And L for Lee is never. Ever. Late.... for anything.

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Comments: 50

SorrowStars [2014-05-28 22:36:29 +0000 UTC]

can i be in?

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-29 09:51:07 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 17:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Can you put me in the story? If you need infro ask????

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-29 17:45:27 +0000 UTC]

I guess I can add you as one of their relatives later in the story, probably, after my 1st picture is uploaded.

Who do want to be related to?

BTW- Stampy(in the story and real life) has a sister who I've put in there, and a little brother who I made up. So im kinda leanin to squid or lee.

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 17:59:57 +0000 UTC]

either, if any of them happens to be a relative of a wolf xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-29 18:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess, L for Lee could, but only in his Mincraftia form.

But I still need your name and age,don't worry, I'm not gonna use em, just mess around with them.

Would you mind being a friend of the gang, like another form of Amy lee or Rosie or frogangel or maybe mousie?

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 23:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Can my oc be Stampy's cousin? just in Minecraftia?

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 18:29:18 +0000 UTC]

yesh, i wanted to kinda be in the gang and helping Lee protect Stampy xD

i sent my oc's info x3

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ashpile In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 17:48:55 +0000 UTC]

What is your name, dont worry im not gonna use it, just twist it into a similar name, and your age, just so I dont use it.

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 18:15:14 +0000 UTC]

i'll give some facts about my oc u can use. x3

Name: Narnia

Look (link): oi58.tinypic.com/2dlnfqg.jpg

Family: (unknown, your choice to decide) 

Attitude: Can be aggressive, and aggressively playful, but acts like a idiot at most times, Can be quiet at sometimes but mainly loud

Age:10 (yes apparently my oc is 10 x3)

Last name: Justice (you can change if you want x3)

Fav song (s): Awoken (i listen to that too much now x3), Discord, Rainbow Factory, Nightmare Night, Brave, Gold, Neon Lights

Yeaaaaaaaa  LONG   

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 08:29:12 +0000 UTC]

how about Maddie Justice, the dumb one, who rarely has a good idea, who, similar to others, is 13, and is related to Stampy, by her father's twin sister, who is Mads' mum.

BTW- her nickname would be Mads

It would be in the real world, but she follows her friends to Minecraftia, and goes with the others, but goes back with Stampy.

They would still be cousins in Minecraftia, and would look like mittens did in ep 173- Mitten's wish.

You like that idea?

P.S You would be looking after Stampy when you go goofing off with the others, since you are the eldest, by a few months. Still idiotic though, not mature at all, Lee is the mature one, also looking after the others, including Stampy

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 15:12:11 +0000 UTC]

plus Maddie is too close to my real life name i think.... im just not comfortable with it. Mainly beacause there was a girl in my class that didn't really like me named Maddie xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 16:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok, Ill keep it as Narnia

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 09:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Did you get the info on my oc? In case u didn't i'll send it again xD

Name: Narnia

Look (link): oi58.tinypic.com/2dlnfqg.jpg

Family: (unknown, your choice to decide) 

Attitude: Can be aggressive, and aggressively playful, but acts like a idiot at most times, Can be quiet at sometimes but mainly loud

Age:10 (yes apparently my oc is 10 x3)

Last name: Justice (you can change if you want x3)

Fav song (s): Awoken (i listen to that too much now x3), Discord, Rainbow Factory, Nightmare Night, Brave, Gold, Neon Lights



Sorry but, i just kinda what her first name as Narnia, and the last as unknown, i also wanted Stampy and Narnia to be cousins. But, she doesn't get captured, she stays and helps protect Stampy alone, (if Lee wont help)

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 11:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Ok, so instead of you being a cat, you could be a dog, who is called Narnia Vega, who is actually from the human world, but stays with Stampy, who's her cousin,when going to minecraftia, Lee gets captured by HitTheTarget, and Narnia and Squid protect him, while waiting for Ank and Finball to bring back Lee.

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 14:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Wolf instead of dog, and everything else is ok!

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 16:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Got it. So you would be narnia Vega, a wolf in the realm of Minecraftia, and a 12 year old girl in human realm, who is Stampy's cousin, and how about a crush on Lee(who would be Leo in HW, who she met him as),who both together protect their friend, and Narn( her nickname) is the quiet one, who barely ever talks, and is the smart one. 

BTW-I don't want to give much of the story away.

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 16:11:03 +0000 UTC]

I wanted Narnia as Lee's apprentice and her nickname to be Nia,

no crushes xD boys have crushes on her though, not the gang maybe  xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 17:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Umm... No offence, but Lee wouldn't really have an apprentice since they're kids in both realms

Also, if there are any boys with crushes, I'd like them to be in the group, on Nia( I actually prefer that nickname) if there are any romances at all.

Sorry if this isn't wat u wanted, but it is my story, so I'll take in suggestions and add to it. Please stop there and keep it as is, but I do want your opinions on the whole crush thing, of who likes who

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 17:13:59 +0000 UTC]

kk, but Nia doesn't crush on other ppl  im done now xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 17:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Nia doesnt crush, maybe Squid does on someone else or her, but I kinda want it to be a phinbella situation if u know what I mean, but with the boy crushin

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 17:20:12 +0000 UTC]

i dunt know what ya mean o3o

im not gonna respond anymore if ya don't want me to xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-06-09 16:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Phinbella is from tons of Phineas and Ferb between Phineas and Isabella, who had had a crush on him since they were like, 6

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 17:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Squid has a crush on nia. That's what I meant.

Id actually love for you to help me with this one cos I'm kinda runnin out of ideas, but not on TFR, my other story, I have 3 books already planned out for that.

BTW I have started a donation pool, and would love if u donated

You can keep responding

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-05-30 18:18:17 +0000 UTC]

ok and yea, if i had points i'd donate them xD

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-05-30 18:59:11 +0000 UTC]

kk

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-06-09 18:25:38 +0000 UTC]

how long will it be till Narnia is in? I just added u to my deviantwatch, I just noticed that I didn't add u

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-06-11 06:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Not long now, maybe 2 or 3 chaps?

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-06-11 15:41:00 +0000 UTC]

oh ok x3

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ashpile In reply to SorrowStars [2014-07-22 17:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Your creation has been mentioned! She probably get more deets next chap

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SorrowStars In reply to ashpile [2014-07-22 18:33:41 +0000 UTC]

ok

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ChocolatNinja [2014-05-28 17:30:57 +0000 UTC]

O. My. Gawd.

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ashpile In reply to ChocolatNinja [2014-05-29 09:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Is it really that good? I didn't think so, and I'm sorry the chaps are so short. My original series is only longer since it flashes between two people. Do you like that one too?

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ChocolatNinja In reply to ashpile [2014-05-29 11:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Plus its really intense

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ashpile In reply to ChocolatNinja [2014-05-29 16:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I guess so. By the way, the next chap might be up 2 morrow

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ashpile [2014-05-25 07:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Could you tell other people about it plz, I want to see if I can rack up some watchers.

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Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 04:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Cool story

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 07:23:46 +0000 UTC]

Thnx. It means a lot.

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 07:27:41 +0000 UTC]

NP

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 07:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Why not?

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 08:38:59 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean why not?

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 08:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sorry, didnt understand you, I'm glad you'll be spreading the word

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 09:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Np that's mean no problem

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 10:06:31 +0000 UTC]

Great. I expect to see more viewers soon. So, have you checked out my own story? TFR

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 10:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes,it's great

But i like Stampy story

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 11:12:20 +0000 UTC]

Thnx! 

Its fine if you prefer ALAW over The Fake Reality.

Im just trying to make my fellow deviants happy

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 11:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 11:56:07 +0000 UTC]

Anything wrong?

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Shotachair356 In reply to ashpile [2014-05-25 12:15:19 +0000 UTC]

No,still fine

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ashpile In reply to Shotachair356 [2014-05-25 12:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Great

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